All Comments on 'Nude Melissa'

I'm impressed. A good, long story with plenty of action.

... in desperate search for cheap laugh, has to resort to the lowest level and accuse people of East Anglia of activities that they pretend others don't indulge in??

Quote - "... just doesn't seem plausible to me ... Well, maybe on the Fens in the east of England that'd work, but..."

Me thinks he doth protest too much!!

Can it be a guilty conscience?

For that, cretin, irrespective of any merits your 'story' might have earned, you get 1*

The inability of the previous anon to take a joke may have proven the author's point

Best I've read in a while. 5*'s

For a long story, I really liked it. Very good story!!

A fantastic storyline and a well written story.

If there were any mistakes in the story, I didn't see them, because I was so involved with reading the story.

Thanks for the great read.

I liked the slow, steady development. Getting the mum re-involved was a very good idea.

I appreciate the effort that goes into writing a thoughtful story. This was very well done. The characters were developed and not simple clichés. The plot was developed and far more sophisticated than the usual 'cabin-in-a-blizzard' story. It was definitely a five-star effort. There were a few typographical errors, but they did not distract from the story. I do not use an editor and I have a few typos in my stories; we probably should both use an editor to make our stories even stronger. Please keep writing.

along and worth it been done very well. hope this is just a beginning of a long tale. :)

It was nice to read a grammatically correct story without numerous misspellings. I liked the length and character development. Thanks for writing this story.

Great story. I expected there would be an explosive encounter when Julia found out what had been going on between Eammon and Melissa. Since that situation has blown over, it's amazing how well they are getting on.

Good luck in the contest.

Mother and daughter eating each other,sucking hubby/father's cock,sharing his cum.It just doesn't get better than that action.Bet every man,just like me,has a hard-on from reading this.Great writing and great characters are hard to find so it made this story very special.Is there a man alive who doesn't dream and have fantasies about watching his wife eat pussy,I don't think there is.Again awesome story,write more like it. LT

This is one of the best stories that I have read here on literotica. You made the characters real. I usually don't read stories that are more than three screens but, this was an easy read and, the twelve screens went by very quickly.

just to let you know that your comments re: The Fens , is not true. We do have some decorum in this part of the world lol

This was just great, Melissa is such a vixen.

Great writing.

These days I have found a dearth of beautifully written, completely original stories on Literotica. At least in the incest category. The wonderful level of writing and story telling by authors like yourself is becoming a rare event. I was actually dreading the end of your story towards the end, hoping for another half dozen or so pages. I was, being a Yankee, even able to mottle through your British jargon, more or less.

As an aside, I was hoping to see Melissa become pregnant as she desired early on in this saga. Still, that was in no way a deal breaker for me.

Thank you again!

ansdguy

I want Julia. Beautiful story, My mouth is dry.......

I consider myself to be a competent writer and I judge other writers' stories against significant standards. I appreciate your stories. The plots are palpable, the characters seem real, and the sex is sensual. Keep doing what you do well - write! I don't know anything about Fens but it must be like Arkansas.

Awesome story, had me wanting more, like Melissa and Julia, they can do it to me anytime, well done

geronimo_appleby has written a fascinating tale of complex family sex that embodies the idea "The family that plays together stays together."

Melissa Morgan, 18, is the unintended catalyst, first seducing her domineering father Eamonn, then her reluctant mother Julia. The story is about how all this happened.

As stories in this category go, Nude Melissa is one of the best. It is a long story, but it needed to be tong to set up the evolution of the family sexual involvement.

Great story and well written. I would have given you a 5 if you had gotten either your daughter or your wife pregnant.

Nice Story!

Excellent! Good plotting and pace. You use language superbly.

The plot was excellent. Pace and direction just right. When is the sequel?

i was kind of hoping when dad got to France that he would find that mum (Jules) and daughter (Mel) were working on mums fantasy and have another man there fucking mum in the mouth and dad just walk up and start fucking mum to show how much all had grown over the past year but that could lead to another story

over all i found the flow kept moving and entertaining good erotic story so i give it a 4.5 * rating well executed and not bad on the spelling at least we did not get lost in trying to read the misspelling because there were a few but not many

Mel would make a good director of action

I agree with your intro about writing more than the bare facts. This was a well crafted story that managed to make some fairly unbelievable events seem feasible. Naturally, a certain amount of suspension of belief is necessary but you managed to keep it within reasonable levels for a fantasy. I enjoyed it very much - definitely 5*.

What a fantastic read. Totally enjoyed it from begining to end. One of the best scripted stories i have read with very few grammatical mistakes and even those were easily overlooked due to the pace and storyline. Thank you for submitting what i class an excellent read

gets my cock all wet with pleasure

Why would you completely skip the part where mother, daughter and father fuck for the first time together? You build up that part just to totally kill the mood. Shitty fucking writing.

so very sexy

oooooooooooooo-BING! ooooooooooooooo-BING!

borinth-borinth-borinth-borinth

kaaaaaaaaaa-QUOOOODLE! m'heup...

Thanj for helping train my arm muscles *wink wink* or do i mean *wank wank* hha

Nice to see one of my favourite fantasies in print, More, please.

Jeni xxx

Omg loved this so totally depraved and pure unadulterated fucking and sucking. Totally insane levels of sexual pleasure reached. I am totally addicted to cunt and cunt juice, love getting drunk on cunt cream. The more I get the more I want can never get enough cunt. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc's uk.

Absolutely loved it. Hard as...

Nice, G.A.! Well done! Great characters ,Great story!

Well done, great story and character development. Keep up the good work.

you win the award. of course, the daughter's nasty urges are morally less distasteful than a lecherous parent but they all work out and the build up is where the pay off is. Fucking is one thing, but getting there is quite another and you make that journey deliriously suspenseful. great work.

Descriptions of fucking are all the same, no matter who does it but the build up makes a huge difference. the anxiety, fear, desire, lust, taboo, obstacles, etc. get it all foaming hotly before anything happens and you do that superbly. great sex scenes too!

You sir are an artist. An artist of perversion. Fantastic. Currently devouring your catalogue and looking forward to more of your work.

I enjoyed this quite a lot, but I think it would’ve been better if the wife hadn’t joined in at the end. I'm never completely convinced by stories where everyone gets together. Adultery and cheating behind someone’s back is a lot more fun story wise.

Kinky!! Loved it

Spot on story well crafted, hot and erotic such a pleasant contribution to this genre without all the crappy soul searching other writers get into. G-A consistently produces these well wrought pieces and is certainly a favourite writer. Well done again.

such a beautiful story

Such a hot read, love the fact that they all got together in the end. Only one thing could have made it better and that would be if they had a son as well.