by chloehunt
Great story! You manage to make it entirely believable and hot. I wish them both well.
oh my, such an intriguing piece of work! The anticipation was very arousing! Thank you!
I understand how debilitating a mental disorder can be and you used the innocence of two people and their desires to overcome their maladies and into a sweet relationship. The only negative for me was the use of the phrase" can I fuck you Katie?" For me it took just a little bit of the innocence away.. I hope you win the grand prize, I think it would be well deserved. Now I am going to search for some of your other 33 works.
Thank you, Bigpickle! I'm glad you pointed that out. I actually went back and forth on how to word that, then I left it as it is because Katie and Ian are not mentally innocent. They're physically innocent, but they live in a modern world and have access to all sorts of naughty stuff online. I was definitely not mentally innocent when I was a virgin, so I'm writing from experience ;D Happy reading!
Amazing story and kept my interest peaked from the start. The build up was excellent
I would hope this therapy would be covered by insurance. But if not, I'm still convinced to try it. :)
OMG, you are a fabulous writer with a very seductive style and obvious fertile mind. Certainly a nude week winner!
I think I need some nude therapy now :) I read Camp True Touch prior to reading this so had an idea what was cumming, so erotically charged. Very well written.