All Comments on 'Nude Touch Therapy'

by chloehunt

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dnick47dnick47almost 3 years ago

I really liked it.

DawnRDawnRalmost 3 years ago

Great story! You manage to make it entirely believable and hot. I wish them both well.

crackerfreakcrackerfreakalmost 3 years ago

oh my, such an intriguing piece of work! The anticipation was very arousing! Thank you!

BigpickleBigpicklealmost 3 years ago

I understand how debilitating a mental disorder can be and you used the innocence of two people and their desires to overcome their maladies and into a sweet relationship. The only negative for me was the use of the phrase" can I fuck you Katie?" For me it took just a little bit of the innocence away.. I hope you win the grand prize, I think it would be well deserved. Now I am going to search for some of your other 33 works.

chloehuntchloehuntalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Bigpickle! I'm glad you pointed that out. I actually went back and forth on how to word that, then I left it as it is because Katie and Ian are not mentally innocent. They're physically innocent, but they live in a modern world and have access to all sorts of naughty stuff online. I was definitely not mentally innocent when I was a virgin, so I'm writing from experience ;D Happy reading!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That was fun, erotic and believable. I loved it

fitfidelityfifty64fitfidelityfifty64almost 3 years ago

Amazing story and kept my interest peaked from the start. The build up was excellent

PoiseDexterPoiseDexteralmost 3 years ago

I would hope this therapy would be covered by insurance. But if not, I'm still convinced to try it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So well-written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a beautiful story, do you have others?

biCindy_luvbiCindy_luvalmost 3 years ago

OMG, you are a fabulous writer with a very seductive style and obvious fertile mind. Certainly a nude week winner!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

your writing is like a fine wine,,,, improving with age :-) ,,, brodie55

librertinlibrertinover 2 years ago

Enjoy the prize money!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice pace, very well written.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 2 years ago

I think I need some nude therapy now :) I read Camp True Touch prior to reading this so had an idea what was cumming, so erotically charged. Very well written.

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