by Mac_G
The way this story turned out, I think a better title would be "Soulmates". I liked it very much!
Your story was very well written and a major enjoyment to read. Keep the great works coming.
I just felt it was a bit rushed, would have loved some more drama, nevertheless it was a great read. Good job, could have been great.
This is without a doubt is the best stories I have read on Literotica!!!
I read this story a long time ago, then read it again today. It is one of the best stories on Literotica.
I do not possess the words to explain how much I enjoyed this story. You are a great writer. The storyline was absolutely amazing. I only hope that you and your family continue to be together for many years. Best of wishes, and good luck!
Your story was very, very, well written. It had a nice story line and a good ending. As other have commented, it was refreshing in that it did not dwell on size of body parts, but more on the love between two young people. Like (oldwayne) commented, It reminded me of my first love, and how wonderful it meant to me then. like him I have been married for 43 years and have grandchildren, but this story brought back such good times. Young love is wonderful. Please keep up the good writing and hope to see more stories from you.5568
well written and believable, nothing over the top, non of the crazy exaggerations on size and talent. Thanks, I enjoyed it
This could easily be posted in romance!
Thank you for a fine tale of love.
Keep it up with more like this.
One of my favorites for certain.
A bit gooey, but that's fine in this instance. Keep up the good work!
I wish there where more of these stories on web A million in a possible million
I guess there is nothing more beautiful than young love. Your story took me back to a time so long ago when I experienced my first time with the love of my life. Now were grandparents, with forty-seven years of loving one another. I do hope it will go on for all eternity. Thanks for the beautiful story and for bringing back such a beautiful memory.
very nice and romantic. A pleasure to read. Thank you Mac.
I liked the story when it was originally posted, but I think your changes have made it flow better. Great job.
Perfect sweet story. Fits right into a lunch break.