All Comments on 'Nudity in Art'

Great story, great side stories, great sexual ending. Thanks!

The social ending mad me sad. I'd love to meet Jennifer again if you write a sequel.

Meandering horse manure.

See these three horny guys enter the bar. The Englishman says...

Dude, get your story telling tenses right (always past tense) otherwise you're at the bar telling a cheap story.

A bit long. Maybe less of Brandi, and especially Nathan. Otherwise a good effort. Keep at it.

Try to stay on track. Meandering like it's the Hitchhiker's Guide doesn't work everywhere, particularly here. Still excellent work. Keep it up! 4 stars.

You just gave me the best self pleasure session Ive had in ages. Thank you for both your awesome writing talent and sexy insight!

~Very satisfied Bi-Chick

dont write tangents too side stories. the side stories alone were more than enough to get me off track. you kill your own story, its too long and boring. try sticking to one plot line next time, not ten.. JEEZ

sequel?

idk wut ya'll are talking about. it made the character and situations feel more real. he had a since of realism in the thinking that i can understand and if your reading to fap this is one to take in section if your going for a story this has it but i'd like to see a sequel