by Susan2002
I think Mr Walker got what he deserved ... and I found Myself feeling quite glad you didn't swallow ... amazing that I found I actually cared that he didn't defile you and that you turned the control around ... :)
powerful turn, adds extra layers of fun and intensity the way they are executed here. joyful rhythm to the prose, a pleasure to read.
I loved the story from start to finish. Susan did a great job with this piece. Nice twist on the Mr Walker part of the story. She will surely not have any more problems with him and i hope she maintains contact with Simon after he leaves the hospital. They have developed into a really nice couple and a man with his gift is a rare man indeed. She better not let him get away. I cannot wait for Susan's next story. 5 *
Nicely done...she enjoyed herself and so did he...and yes, I believe you're right, you're probably quite safe with the cum-filled kerchief in your possession...and who knows, you might even enjoy another encounter with the good doctor ;)
Lovely story, could of gone on - recuperative care at home?
Nothing better than a naughty nurse!!
I enjoyed it very much. I was hoping that Simon would pee on the nurse at some point, but it was a clever, fantastic story. I'm not really into watersports, but a girlfriend or two has held my penis while I peed and it is always heaven! I have peed many time with another girlfriend ... She will sit on the toilet and I will knell in front of her ... She hold my cock while we both pee simultaneously ... Sometimes we 'inadvertently' pee on each other in the process ... It feels so good ... I would love to just go into the backyard, have her straddle me, and pee all over my cock while I lay in the grass! Maybe someday ... But your story was very entertaining, and I love the dirty secretness of it all! Write some more please ...
I didn't see that coming--no pun intended. Great ending to a great story.
good series but liked this story teh best. maybe it doesnt make me feel so inferior.
Once again I have waited to read all chapters of this story - being an ex-nurse myself I know the feeling - when I was in training - I met up with a patient who was in the hospital for about 6 weeks and the same thing developed between us - he was a wonderful man - unfortunately he had the big C and died very soon after leaving hospital so we did not get to expand the relationship - but it was wonderful while it lasted - Thank you for bringing back good memories
Nice to see you got hot and bothered even though there was no passion between you and Dr. Walker. You don't need fireworks to have great sex do you Susan. Good job, will we ever see a sequel?
...I would have kicked the asshole right in his balls. However...I do believe our sweet heroine found a much better solution. Keeping his mongramed hanky was nothing short of genius. Looking forward to her further sexy adventures...
WHERE did you learn to write like that?? It's definitely one of my favourites! Keep writing, girl!
I just read this series. I certainly hope Susan manages to have a post-hospital relationship with monster Simon. He's a male fantasy (huge cock, copious semen) as much as is Susan's love of semen.
Voted 5.
Bill Redclouds
Susan is a very adept Nurse! A very well written story, enjoyable reading.