All Comments on 'Nurtured Love'

by promithius

Sort by:
  • 15 Comments
kennyboy82kennyboy82over 3 years ago

What an excellent and well written story. I enjoyed the relatively slow build up to where mom and son first fucked, it added some realism to the tale, instead of the usual five minute seduction scenario we often get. As soon as Charles and Julia came on the scene and the big difference in their ages was apparent I guessed that they were in a similar incestuous situation. The ending of the story was perhaps a little glib but overall a very good effort. 5 stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

For every author who feels the need to have the woman shave, you get 1 star to ruin your score. If you have a bald pussy fetish, just go with that at the onset.

Funewriter1Funewriter1over 3 years ago
A 5-Star Story

I thoroughly enjoy reading your story. Not only was it well-written, but it was a sexually-charged story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not sure this is fiction ??

Anyway, Author thank you.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

I wondered why a 26 year old guy is still living with his mother. I can only guess he was still waiting for puberty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Wow! Love the story! So romantic and erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A rather bizarre way of making time pass. Get up in the morning, feel up mom as much as she'll allow, then <magically, the entire day disappears> and they end up on the couch together, with more attempts at feeling her up. Rinse, repeat, for weeks on end. Is that really all you could think of to space out her change of feelings toward her son?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I thought it was an excellent ending! Beautifully written, and very plausible. You are a good writer Promithius, keep writing . Your grammar and editing are extremely well done.

XYZ

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OK! I have to jump back in after reading some of the comments, so I can comment again. First, I noted that those that were negative, use the'anonymous' to sign off, so 'no balls critics', male or female, should be ignored, and obviously have no sex life or very little experience, probably because no one cares about them. Well, whether a pussy has hair or not is sure not a fetish, it's a lust, and not to be taken as some perverted desire. I've picked hair out of my teeth more than once with no compaint. Next time at that pussy it was shaved, for me I'm told; no fetish. I'm not even going to address the other comments, because I'd be here all day. The incest was real. Mother,son, and father, daughter, great idea. You put it together as smooth as could be expected. Ignore anonymous. If they can't identify themselves their

not worth the comment.

XYZ

GimmemoreM0MsGimmemoreM0Msabout 1 year ago

It started so great. Especially with the mom's back story. I even liked that the sexual acts themselves weren't described in complete details. But then the wedding, the engagement, the honey moon period nothing was shown and then the whole lesbian scene and wife sharing happened. It kinda left a bit of an unpleasant taste in the mouth. And then the mom herself died way too early. It could have been so much more beautiful and amazing relationship but then it ended up such that i only skimmed the last two pages. Still 4" for the first two pages

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The top writing I have seen here. I didn't know where you were going until the end, but BRAVO!! My compliments, great job. JEF

alo0ozalo0oz11 months ago

It was quite nice until....

you gotta know until which point.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Loved the story but liked the mother and son sex the best and you had her die too soon she should have been together with Paul and Julia for more sex and helped raise Robert as he was her Grandson still 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I love the love story between mother and son. Mom didn't want to just jump into it. She wanted to take her time and get used to the idea of being lovers with her son. I would love to have seen mother and son have a child together. Maybe two children.

I also enjoyed the relationship between Paul and his boss. Man, it takes a special man to tell another man that it is OK for him to make love to his woman and in this case his daughter. And he knew that his daughter wanted a baby and they both picked Paul to be the father of that child.

I gave it 4.5

Excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I'm not a big fan of shaved pussy. I had a love who saved herself for Hygenics reason not for looks.

I rather have a nice trim pussy. I love to see my lover's pussy lips (labia minora) swell with her desire. Plant sweet wet angel kisses on those puffy lips and then taste her sweet nectar.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous