All Comments on 'Oaths to Keep Pt. 02'

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RDJohnsonRDJohnson4 months agoAuthor

Thanks for reading my stories, it really means a lot.

This format is still very new and experimental to me, and takes a lot more time and effort to write than my other stuff, so if you want me to keep making more of it, please let me know - giving me a generous 5 star rating is a vote for me to keep going - or if it more your speed, give me some feedback either here in the comments or via private feedback.

IF you loved this chapter, and can't wait to ready more, the next chapter is already up on Patreon.

EroticPolymathEroticPolymath4 months ago

Finding this series really fun and enjoyable! Please keep going!

ArediaAredia4 months ago

I like it! As a D&D player for way too many years you caught my interest with this. Please continue - I'll be waiting! :)

jacksfreewilljacksfreewill4 months ago

Really enjoying the story! Great balance, and the MC feels real.

Rosc0tuskerRosc0tusker4 months ago

I cannot praise this story (and series) highly enough, absolutely fantastic!! Please keep going, this idea has serious potential.

Whats your release cycle on patreon?

Kreeper1812Kreeper18124 months ago

Been waiting for more of the stories! Thanks for sharing. This reminds me a little of the Noob series by Ryan Rommel, which if you haven’t read I would highly recommend.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story. I vote for more. A very well-written second installment of the story. Solid world-building in a very tight story.

RDJohnsonRDJohnson4 months agoAuthor

Thanks everyone for your praise, I very much appreciate your support, chapter 4 is being worked on right now, and I believe I have plenty of material for many more.

Rosc0tusker, thank you for your question. Currently I am trying to publish at least 20k words on Patreon each month, which translates roughly to one looong story, or two shorter ones.

LionBroSairaorgLionBroSairaorg4 months ago

Awesome story keep it up.

DaveK7DaveK74 months ago
Great story getting better -- Five Stars!

But if chapter 4 is getting worked on, when will we see Chapter 3? As Pick Temple used to say in Washington DC in the 50's,

"Pretty please on Heidi bread with sugar on top?!"

RDJohnsonRDJohnson4 months agoAuthor

Hi there, DaveK7,

Thank you for reading my story, I am glad you like it so far.

Next chapter is almost as long as the first two put together.

If you find it hard to wait, it is available for my Patreon supporters.

It is only fair they get a few benefits for enabling me to spend a little more time writing.

If you would rather wait, I do expect it will be posted here in a month or two.

I have other stuff ahead of it in the queue to get posted here, so it has to wait its turn.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love this series well written

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFake4 months ago

Great story, world building and sex scenes. I like the way you write Amber's character and how he grows to understand her motives. I'm hoping they find another harem member soon. Maybe he should do some sex slave or harem training for Amber as part of her thief training.

GemmyTexGemmyTex4 months ago

Great read and bonus points for rpg elements. Would read many more if you wanted to serialize this. Sincere thanks!

ElosisElosis4 months ago

This could end up being one of the greatest series. I love the DnD inspiration! Excited to see where it goes.

ContractorOfLifeContractorOfLife3 months ago

Glad to see the story is still getting updates! Can't wait to read more of it. Really enjoying it so far.

akt196akt1963 months ago

I’m loving this story and hope you continue it soon!

YungMastaYungMasta3 months ago

Awesome story! Loving your writing so far. Glad to hear the next part is much longer. Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love this-keep it cumming!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Absolutely keep it coming, fabulous story so far and now I’m invested.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

hope the new part is able to come out soon, what a story

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Weird to say. But this story got me reading lirpgs. So I hope you continue this! And thanks!

Wash2015Wash201527 days ago

I am really enjoying this series. Just read it for a second time and I hope more chapters are coming soon. Even got me searching for similar stories.

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Great story! Are going to write more chapters?

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

I hope the next chapter gets posted some day.

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

So good, can’t wait for more chapters

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