All Comments on 'Object of Desire'

by Big Gunz

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
To much talking

Not enough fucking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

Would love to see his dominance continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Steamy

That was a hot story!

The fantasy of being able to take a woman and bend her to your will is intoxicating, if a little worrying.

Still as long as it's a fantasy and you don't act it out for real you're okay.

oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
More

Very hot well written story of every man's, that has hot young women working for him, darkest fantasy. More nastier chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
so fucking hot

one of the best stories I have ever read, PLEASE write a second part where he makes her pregnant, it would be so HOT

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Two thumbs up!

Great mix of dirty talking and hot fucking! Wish I had an assistant like that!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
awesome

i read this awhile ago and came across it again today . . . forgot how hot it was! this may be every man's fantasy but it's also a fantasy of women . . . more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
brilliant

this has still got to be one of the best stories i have ever read. love how he forces her to talk dirty till she enjoys it. "who's pussy is it now", this is just a classic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Better than brilliant

Yes! This is what it's all about. Big titted bitch getting fucked senseless while begging for it. The boss should make sure that 'his' pussy is constantly filled with enormous cock - doesn't have to always be his of course! Fuck that slut!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Best I've read.

Ohh, I loved this. Brilliant. I hope to see more from this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice work

This is such a hot story, thank you. :) It's like all my fantasies in one story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

This was great! One of my fantasies, I would love my boss to do this to me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Baloney

Send the prick to jail where he belongs. No other ending is realistic or believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hmmm,

I have wished for my boss to do this to me, abuse my pussy and claim it for himself. You know she wanted it otherwise who cares if she got fired. Love to be submissive to a Dom,

ramonbrookramonbrookabout 10 years ago
Great story .....but

Like a lot of your stories you don't follow it up with a second chapter.

I would like to know why Hayley went from not wanting and actually saying he was raping her to a wanton slut. Maybe a scone chapter can explain that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Variety

Does every woman in the world shave her pussy? Just once I would like to read a story in which a woman does not try to look like a little girl between her legs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Um

Ok so the sec was hot but the no choice part was a big turn off but I get that was the theme it just seemed unnecessary

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