All Comments on 'Observation'

That was amazing, cant wait to read part 2! Hope its soon 🥰

Not much of a voyeur myself - nor am I much for taking advantage of someone who is drunk - but a good story for what it is.

I hold out some hope that after the hangover is gone, she goes down the hall for some more lovemaking with daddy.

Practically every sentence had a comma in it. So unnecessary. The poor writing really throws the reader. Needs a ton of editing.

Almost every sentence had a comma. I’ve never seen that before but it’s quite off-putting. This story needs some serious editing.

..... when they find her cum covered leggings still in the wardrobe.