All Comments on 'Obsessed with Ember Ch. 04'
by black_maestra
- 12 Comments
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoOh come on!!!!!! This long of a wait and only one page!!!! This story is REALLY good. Please make the chapters longer.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoVincent has been stalking Ember since high school. I hope Ember does not become pregnant. Ember needs to be very careful with this very dangerous person. Please update and make the pages longer. Thank you Bain
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoTotally addicted to this story! Please write more or keep pages longer!! What Vincent is doing is wrong, but hope to see them both reach an understanding and be better for each other. Oh, and what happened to Enrique? Would love to see him but i'm still rooting for Vincent-Ember ;D
black_maestraalmost 9 years agoAuthorWhen I posted chapter 4, my pages from Word were 5 pages long. Once a chapter or story gets posted here the page count is severely reduced. Chapt. 2 on Word had 29 pages but once again on here it posted like 4 pages or something like that. I will be more aware of the page lengths I submit.
Thank you for the comments. Chapt. 5 is currently undergoing editing by my beta reader.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoWhat a story. Amazing. Seriously. Love the characters, the imagery, the plot. All I can say is, more please!
Anonymousabout 8 years agoany1 heard of that song from Filter? Happy Together. Perfect song for this story. Well at least for the guy anyway.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI loved this story and I'm just wondering if ur going to put out chapter 5 cause it's been almost a year now
black_maestraabout 7 years agoAuthorI have had three different editors kind of bail on me, well technically 2 did. I need to make a few changes for chapter 5. It will be kind of short, just help u guys along. So sorry, I really had writers block for awhile and I hate it when updates take forever too.
