by talespinner0559
Thank you to Jimmy Graham for his assistance with editing this story for me. It was supposed to say so at the top of the story. Thanks again Jim.
After that great buildup, We need more of how the relationship continued,
looking forward to the followup experiences between the 2........
You have to have him get into Beth also, and then the three of them get together. I was hard, and pre-cum leaking profusely from my dick. What a wonderful story, just get Beth involved. So she is a little heavy, large women are also great!
I started this story 5 times before i was able to finish it, The entire first page was a mess,The first 8 paragraphs were agonizing , repetitive, out of sequence.. , thought maybe this was published having slipped through the hands of a editor..then saw your post...you Had the base for strong story ,very hot thoughts......written /edited very poorly.
need many more sequels
NO to Beth; she's nothing but a Biotch - however,he should explain to her why, give her a chance to change & earn a chance
wish Cindy was my neighbor... DKP