All Comments on 'Obsessed with Mrs. A'

by talespinner0559

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Looking forward to the next installment.

talespinner0559talespinner0559about 12 years agoAuthor
My thanks to Jimmy Graham

Thank you to Jimmy Graham for his assistance with editing this story for me. It was supposed to say so at the top of the story. Thanks again Jim.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good Story and Buildup

After that great buildup, We need more of how the relationship continued,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice start

looking forward to the followup experiences between the 2........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Beth

You have to have him get into Beth also, and then the three of them get together. I was hard, and pre-cum leaking profusely from my dick. What a wonderful story, just get Beth involved. So she is a little heavy, large women are also great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I started this story 5 times before i was able to finish it, The entire first page was a mess,The first 8 paragraphs were agonizing , repetitive, out of sequence.. , thought maybe this was published having slipped through the hands of a editor..then saw your post...you Had the base for strong story ,very hot thoughts......written /edited very poorly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
really like the story

need many more sequels

NO to Beth; she's nothing but a Biotch - however,he should explain to her why, give her a chance to change & earn a chance

wish Cindy was my neighbor... DKP

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Good read not that hot but a good start. Thanks for the read.

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