by TheWriter
One of the most fun and thrilling stories I've read in quite a while. I'm frightened with myself for liking it as much as I do. A truly enjoyable and entertaining read!
I'm shocked at how, strangely, I understand the main character - though I can't say I would approach it the same way (the issue of wanting Red). I am amazed at how real you make that person, and how much I sympathize with him by the end. Keep writing!