All Comments on 'Occupancy of an Empty Seat'

A thank you to the Literotica moderator(s) for their patience and helpful advice in assisting to enable this to be published. Thank you!

Excellent piece of writing. Any chance of a 750 word part 2? Or a part 2 with more than 750 words?

As short as it was I enjoyed it and it was written in a style of 'OnehitWanda' whose stories captivate me. I look forward to reading more of your works.5*****!

Very nice!

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I like it it is very good

Very nice!

This whole story was poetry! Beautiful!

I come back to this one, again and again. Truly one of my favorite shorts, ever. The sweet and sudden breathlessness and coy of the chance encounter, and the gamut of emotions and the intensity of wanting yet another--the wait, the watch, the breath, held til bursting. The journey you take the reader on, in 750 words---its building intensity, its sudden and delicious introspect, its headiness and thrill--so very, very well done. I loved it!