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This is starting off really well. Just the right amount of weird.

And that quibble is the use of the word doner (or döner) here. A doner is a type of kebab. The word you should have used is DONOR: someone who donates. Makes a big difference.

Very lovecraftian, very weird, and most of all, fresh ideas. Came here from one of your old comments where you mentioned your blue green morality project, Oculus. And I'm not disappointed! I can see inspirations from the alien franchise, the movie annihilation, but till now your overall ideas are completely original. Looking forward to your creations.

Wtf! Why the hell did he not have a weapon and ffs why was the armor so shit it was damaged by a shitass spear?! Otherwise good story.

Well, the answer to your questions, Anon

1) The spear is more advanced than it seems

2) He didn't expect to be permanently in another dimension and bringing weapons seemed like it'd be kinda rude!