All Comments on 'Oculus Pt. 02'

by DragonCobolt

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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading!

Just as a warning: This story is on temporary hiatus! I've just been in a really bad headspace for writing horror. Maybe it has SOMETHING to do with the mass pandemic? Who knows!

Next week, expect something less...dark.

warelliswarellisover 3 years ago
Very neat!

I'm really digging the H.R. Gigeresque setting and beings here. :D

That woman was practically a white-colored xenomorph almost in description. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Marvelous!

The world building is superb, and I'm digging the allusion to dreamscape. It's a damn shame that you put this story on hiatus. But it's okay, sort out your things, then return when you can, we'll wait.

P.S- was that water world survival game subnautica? ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Dude I really hope you write more this story is awesome but I also hope you will have him taken at some point by a male

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 1 year agoAuthor

Hey Anon! Thanks!

I actually DO know how I want to not continue Oculus, but rather, restart it with a different take and a better, more spooky atmosphere.

(And yes, it would be super duper fucking gay as hell, he'd definitely get fucked and fuck some hot dudes.)

THe only problem is I only have so many hours in the day to write auuhh!

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