All Comments on 'Odd Couple'

Told through the eyes of the one who does other people's women. Will there be a lot of noise from the BTB crowd. I was amazed at the time and energy that went into developing a false image of Tia..

and a bit different. That's good

For the read.

Probably not as erotic as erotic can get!

(The Devil made me do it!)

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is a very fine bit of writing. Thank you.

The cuckold has seldom been discussed with more respect on this site, by someone who isn't one. You left it right where I remain, completely puzzled by the behavior. On a side note, I work with the Wounded Warriors. Their wives are the salt of the earth, living a life they did not sign up for and doing it with courage, selflessness and the truest form of love. I get very defensive of them when faced with stories that characterize them in lesser terms. You recovered by revealing them as frauds, but I was worried there for awhile.

Decent story but I must be jaded. Role playing Is so de rigueur in that plane of existence. She pretended to be a writer. Can a non- writer fake creativity in that area to another rexpert in that field?

To me, this narrator was a whole lot less intelligent then the author & that disconnect took the fine edge that is usually to be found on MGM's story. Was thus story a disaster ? No way ! Yet still ....

Writing about a man who object is to cuckold other men for a story is not a subject to be proud of writing. You are way better than this tale. Carry on.

Really, really shitty.

The odds a couple being as deceptive as were Tia and Tom would allow a stranger they intended to ghost after one encounter to know where they actually lived are zero.

I liked it but can’t tell you why, in one respect it felt really good but in another respect it was bad, it was a steady paced story but not that much of a character build up, and the descriptions were basic

I have trouble giving this a rating because I have trouble how I feel about it, in one respect I like it in another I don’t like it, the characters are odd, the descriptions are basic, the plot debatable