All Comments on 'Odd Jobs (Some Odder Than Others) Ch. 03'

This story is off to a great start. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

I like your writing. Pity you stopped.

what the point of this story is or if there was a point or direction you were going. I guess it was a pleasant ride to go on but I have no idea where we ended up or why. Maybe it was enough to go along with you, I don't know what we were doing here. Maybe I should just ask you? Scotty / slowrdr@aol.com / I sorta liked it I think and maybe there was no point to it? Maybe there's more to come? By the time I got into it -it was over I guess

very well written, a pleasure to read! It's a shame the story stops here, your quality of writing had me hooked. I was looking forward to some subtle but hot escapades!!

Can't wait to read more!