All Comments on 'Odd Opportunities Ch. 03'

I hope you all are enjoying my series, but would really appreciate comments of what you think of it! Thanks for reading and voting...

...these characters? I know it's been a loooooong time since I wrote this, but I'm thinking about continuing the story. Anyone want to tell me their opinion? Thanks!

Most writers here would have had her jump on the opportunity, but you chose to draw it out. I think it was a good choice, opting for a little build-up, rather than cutting straight to the chase at every turn.

These_things were very distracting, and more than a little annoying. I'm guessing you originally typed in proper hyphens, and somewhere along the way some auto-program changed them up on you. Still, I'd go back and edit those little bastards out.