All Comments on 'Oddball Ch. 03'

Holy Hell!! Didn't see that end coming from anywhere. Great third installment and looking forward to where this goes...

after trying to keep up with all the characters thru 3 chapters, you murder 2 of them. with no hint that it was coming...WOW! next chapter NOW!

Omg , that was a crazy chapter! I can't believe she killed them both. I can't wait till the next chapter!

WHAT!!WHOA!!! Dang....have to say I didn't see it coming. Sort of took my mind off being irritated ewith the plot of Mary must also be interested in Britney -- you know the "always needed thing that ALL us woman want other woman when you got a good man. But you didn't even leave room for them to be rescued. Once again..DANG!!!! By the way...it is possible you know to be happy and content with one other person but you have to not want to impress the fellas to do so. Doesn't really need to be a part of every relationship in every story. Just thought.

i so did not see that coming. great work. keep them coming

Loved this chapter. Never saw the ending coming. Please keep up the great work.

man, you can one hell of a story. but why did you have to kill lily and george? i loved those characters. yea, it was one intense twist, but ah, i was looking forward to the two of them getting married and having kids. i can not wait till the next chapter. please hurry up and post it/them!

Never saw that ending at all. Must have read & reread that final part at least 6 times, with my mouth open in shock the entire time. Wow.

Your main theme is quite mainstream (sorry for the pun): looser can get lucky, too, if they are good persons.

Nothing wrong with that, but what I really love about "Oddball" are your minor characters and the little twists. And now, this! You totally caught my by suprise.

Bad ! "1*" .

did not see that coming! too bad, i liked george & lilly.. *tear*.. ....... mary is too funny! her "atonement- punishments" just keep dragging her further into sin! lol love her logic!

What the heck no George and Lilly... Theresa went crazy

That last bit was pretty fucked up. Intense plot device, though, and plausible. *shrug*

Enjoying the story. Your a great writer! Seriously.

That plot twist sucked