All Comments on 'Odette Ch. 02'

and most arousing writing. Five.

put the thesauras down.

Charter 3, pls

Someone who knows his (or her) literature. It is very funny to see a play on the best known book of a former Russian American author who once narrowly escaped Berlin after moving there from Berlin, where Kamera obscura was written. That book starts in his own English translation so beautifully: Once upon a time there lived in Berlin, Germany, a man called Albinus. He was rich, respectable, happy; one day he abandoned his wife for the sake of youthful mistress; he loved; was not loved; and his life ended in disaster.

Thanks for one more arousing effort. Yes, sometimes too much detail in the description, but still holds attention. I love your stories, particularly when suburban wives are involved.

Always excellent writing- however, your last few stories pale in comparison to ones like the "Bridge" series or 'Pissed off with Jeff'.

in response to anon...of course! how dare his fantasy be fantastical!

I thought it was a very well written bit of dreams. Perhaps a bit wordy at times but very nice.