All Comments on 'Of Dogs and Deliveries'

Went from dinner to love in one date possible but still a little to fast.....

I wish I could give this a 6!

I love the way your characters and story are interesting in themselves, and not simply for any romance or sex.

What a sweet story with a hot little romance. I looove your writing! I agree about six stars. Thanks for a great read.

That's what you state in your bio.

However, I would say you tend more to saccharin. This was so gushy-sweet as to be all but unbearable.

I believe you mean saccharine (excessively sweet or sentimental) vs. saccharin (a sweet-tasting synthetic compound used in food and drink as a substitute for sugar).

But, alas, this is my style of writing. There is plenty of grittier material to be found here at Literotica, so please feel free to read those stories in lieu of mine.

Pedants of the world, Unite!

Absolutely perfect. And a gentle correction to the Anonymouse who can't tell an artificial sweetener from a descriptive term. Nicely done.

I couldn't find an error anywhere in your writing, but you will now have to watch out. You have set yourself a high bar and a challenge to others to find fault.

Lue

Ps. I liked the story too.

I very much appreciate your highlighting of Southern manners and grace versus the two centuries old prejudices of the those who hail from the rest of our country. the pace was spot-on, the dialog relaxed and natural and the scenes believable. five and Faved

. I don't normally use anonymous, but I just added this new laptop and adding a new device seems to make Google screw up all passwords.

keep writing, please.

rasmat

Very enjoyable read. Dan was a little too perfect, Harvard grad and all, but It was an easy, breezy read. Thanks.

Two things...

You can never as a professional driver, of any kind, become so distracted by a sun glare or something else that you miss a pretty woman, dogs or no dogs, because of it. That's why we have shades. 😉

Jerking of, it doesn't even have to be in a car, is not a good thing prior to interacting with dogs. Try it and you'll get my point . 😉

Otherwise it all high fives and cheering from me.

They will have doggy babies