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burninglove over 6 years ago

I don't quite get the metaphysical stuff

Sorry,

I normally love reading your stories. This one didn't turn me on - went round and round - instead of arriving at a good end.

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Daunti almost 6 years ago

I couldn't improve it.

Good in every respect. Worth 5 stars. Even your mystics are accurate.

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...

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