by dissociativedesire
Oh my dear lord! I know this is a stand alone but please consider a follow up. Yes, it’s a ‘done before’ theme, but rarely as well as you pulled off. Your writing is exceptional. Imaginative and well paced. In three short pages I fell in love with these boys. Thank you for sharing.
Needs a continuation. I don't often read male on male action but this was superbly well done. I really want to know what Oslo's reason was for leaving...... Really curious about that part. Would love to read more of their story.
Whoa this is so good! Your writing is superb, and puts me right there with them. I am so glad this showed up as a "similar story" to read. The theme might have been done before, but not this well. Thank you for it! Excited for more chapters.
I actually like this more the second time around. Very well wriiten. Great story.