by peachesmelba
Just a little bit more than one page please. it needs to move just a little faster.
just lovely. I truly love innocence and tender domination. Just lovely.
A very erotic, romance story you have going here. I can't wait for you to continue with this delicious story of captivity and desire. So delicious.
This story is so sexy and cute at the same time. Please let us know when u will be posting the next chapter. Hope it doesnt take another month.
Also would love some more background on why Ronald is who he is.
Thanks a lot
Very happy to see this new part of your story and ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT to see more. Excellent writing, you should write a book! Please hurry with the next part, I'm dying to read on
Please continue you stories they are amazing this one is my favorite 5 stars!!!
Please continue with this series! The cadence is just right ..... And though it is a tried & true story line it doesn't read predictably, in fact, in a short amount of text the main characters already have appealing personalities. I'll look forward (& often) for other installments.