All Comments on 'Of Mice and Men Ch. 05'

This story is so great. It humanizes Ethan for the audience and lets us give him a second chance. Carey is so cute! One thing that killed me is the lack of inner strife from Carey when he went to the hospital with Ethan. It would have added a lot to the story to remind the audience of his fears and let us see that Carey is willing to trample his fears in the hopes of helping Ethan, and at the same time trampling his own fears in the process.

I really enjoy your writings. Keep it up!!

I love how you managed to get to the root of Ethan's problem. Interesting to see how you get him and mike back together. will Carey lead the way? Im still interested.

Ah I see what happened to Ethan and he's not completely irredeemable, some people are genuine bigots and see others different to them as less than without any reason. Ethan had the unfortunate event of something happening to him by one person and having it taint his whole view of an entire people. I'm glad he identified the root cause of his hate and is getting help for it.