All Comments on 'Of Water & Fire'

great start... sounds intriguing...

A very nice start.I can't wait to read more about Eva.

ddabget some editting help if have not already done so. Your story is too good to be marred by minor typos and case errors. I am already enjoying it after just this first chapter. It hints of great things to come in the best modes of DnD. Magic and might in the same person is very refreshing and promises unlimitted capabilities. Lynnc23d