by BarbT
I really enjoyed this! The sensuous hot raw sexhas me er extremly excited! Great story!
The sex was great and you laid the foundation for a good series. The only thing was that Jenny seemed a little two-dimensional. I hope you fleshed her out in the later stories. Keep writing.
It was a hot story and got me wet pretty damn fast, but the grammar and spelling was a little off. other than that it was hot.
with Jenny getting fucked even before school began--with a guy she just met. It also doesn't appear Jenny was concerned about getting pregnant or an STD.
Jenny's education was neglected--at least the sexual part of her education. Her mother should have taken her aside before she left for college and provided some practical advice about sex in addition to her religious instruction.
If Jenny isn't more careful, she will have to place that embarrassing call home, "Hey mom. Guess what? I'm pregnant."
Great story! I love the background of where Jenny comes from and how she wants to expand her sexual horizons, and I love that the sex is realistic for a change! Think what a disaster it would have been if this story included the dreaded phrase "instantly hard again." Love the college-age realism, and Jenny comes off as super adorable ("and then he massaged my buns." OMG I love it). So glad there are a dozen more chapters!
I loved the story. I loved my time in college and always look back fondly on it. Thanks for bringing me back in time.