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RedRhythmicSerpent over 4 years ago

First pleasant surprise of the New Year.

Out fucking standing! Well Done.

narcotic over 4 years ago

I love this

It's a true pleasure to read something where the characters actually fuck in character. Bravo!

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Excellent

Well done. Thanks for a great submission.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

This is a perfect short story!

This was a really great read. Perfect lead in, character exposition, climax, and denouement. Thank you for sharing it with us.

BillyTheGray 9 months ago

What a great story! Well developed characters! Expressive language. And a wonderful plot that kept my attention all the way through!

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Update [12/30/2019]: Life intervened, and my writing slowed to a crawl. But things are picking up again. Finishing up a few shorter stories, and I'll upload them in the next week. Larger projects proceeding apace, but not near completion: * third book in "The Strangeness Withi...

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