All Comments on 'Off To a Rough Start'

Outstanding story! Worthy follow up to the previous stories.

5

Thank you. I truly enjoyed your story. It is well crafted. Has a great buildup to the unfolding of the romance. When the realization that Mack and Pam are highly attracted to each other the story line develops perfectly. I truly enjoyed the knowledge about flying airplanes and the roles of being a captain, a first officer and training to become a airline captain. Dealing with the tragedy was tasteful and appropriately done. I've been following your stories, and not once have I been disappointed. Don't stop writing. K

Beautiful love story.

Loved the story! Even though there were a lot of airline lingo and abbreviations that I didn't understand, I still very much enjoyed the story. I was kind of worried when Mack asked to be excused from Pam's training section. Just wasn't sure what was going on, but glad it turned out that he was just so taken by her that it befuddled him. Have to add this story to the long list of your others that are five stars. Thanks

Great stuff.Thank you very much.

As always, another exceptional story. Definitely 5 star worthy!

Yeah, the plane-to-plain talk ratio was a bit over the top, but the story was quite good. I worry a bit about a pilot who could be so thoroughly distracted by a woman. 😀 Always a pleasure to see a new story from you guys. Thanks!

You two never disappoint. Another great story. Thank you.

Loved it, exceptional as always. Really like this series of stories. More please!

Having grown up in North Dallas area and retired from an Airline (as a tech geek) sets me up to love all your stories,

5*

Hey, WillDevo……what a great trilogy. Really enjoyed the characters and their gradual integration into the story line. You’re a master story teller, sir, and I thank you for your creativity.

A classic Romance written in a tender manner. A must read!

Just great, what made it better was his striking out with married women in the past, but then third times the charm eh?

My wish list would have included tying off the loose end of the complimented desk clerk Tamara, left as it is that’s a bit of a red herring as far as relationships go in the story, but I get how that interaction was just story building.

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz 5⭐️

Great Story! Really enjoyed it.

Did it again! I so enjoy the work of team Willdevo. Thanks for sharing another 5* Romance.

I really enjoy your writing style and logical plot progression. There were a few misses for me in this story. We never get any background of either character in this one, unlike your previous stories in this universe. It held me back a bit from fully engaging with them emotionally. You also got too heavy in the mechanics of the airline industry at the expense of the relationship Mack and Pam. As presented, they’re only together because of physical attraction/lust. Previous stories I’ve read of you’re didn’t do that. Finally, the story ends a little abruptly for my tastes. It’s not a carrier landing, but you definitely didn’t grease the landing. LOL 4*

Loved this Romance!

A thoroughly enjoyable read. The two of you never disappoint. Thank you.

What to give for a rating?? A 5 of course! Keep up the great work!

Fun, sweet story, that I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!

Superlative, as always. MAX 8's are easy as long as you know where the kill switch is for the auto-pilot.........

As opposed to a trilogy, I think this is 4-story series (quadogy?). Here is the order I think is chronological. Please reply to correct:

1 - The Flight Before Christmas

2 - A Walk Changed Everything

3 - We Did a Good Thing

4 - Off To a Rough Start

I especially like the scene at the end when everyone discovers that Cam and Pam are sisters!

Another great romance from the dynamite team WillDevo!

Great story, very enjoyable. The flight instructions and simulator scenes were great as well. Very different form run of the mill LIT romances.

I must admit I love some of your technical details and how you wrangled a tutor captain into the plot as the love interest. First I thought Pam was, then not then you made it happen. Loved the way Mack found out that Cam was Pam's little sister but agreed with one reviewer who said it came to a halt very quickly after that.

Still a great 5⛤ story.

No rating.

Too much detail.

Got bored and quit

I enjoyed the story, the conclusion, the details that made the story feel real, and the conversations.

I kept wondering if the next paragraph was where things became real. The pages of delays only made the reveals more tasty.

Building off of PhotoMeister's observation, these five stories are related. This seems like the right order to read them:

1 - The Flight Before Christmas

2 - A Walk Changed Everything

3 - We Did a Good Thing

4 - Havana, Baby!

5 - Off To a Rough Start

That was one great story! Now I'm going to have to go back and read the two prequels.

Odd, normally I'm not keen on such detail of sexual encounters, but it seemed to fit into this particular story quite well!

Pam/Cam a great gag, could have been corny, but it melded in well.

I loved the chief pilot's 'one question' dialogue.

Possibly the story could be improved if you mentioned something about Mack's ill fated first marriage in the first few paragraphs, and mentioned his relationship fears from time-to-time. I think this would provide a good framework and add a little tension - which this story seems to lack.

Good twist with the kid sister!

Enjoyed the story. Was this the last story of the series?