All Comments on 'Off to College'

Loved the story, had me hard the whole way through. I never thought about my daughter that way as I drove her to college but I can't say that now many years later. I must have been a good guy back then but now I'm dirty old man and love it.

Would have been a lot better had you proofread this before publishing it, so many times you used the wrong versious of the word that should have been used

He should have filled her up. And she could have came home in a few months knocked up

You begun the story stating that only the front passenger seat was free, then in the next paragraph they were sharing the back seat. Goes downhill from there.

One of the best car ride stories.

Hope you follow up with a holiday treat.

You owe an apology, because here is the copied and pasted part of the story you referred to " Looking at the car is was packed as full as it could get. The truck could barely close, the backseat had one spot left and the only place you could sit up front was in the driver’s seat."

The only error there is that truck should be trunk.

rem556, there is more than one error in that piece.

The story didn't need an editor. It was covered fairly well, even if I didn't like the latter part. It did need proof reading to catch the word and structure problems.

Nice dad was able to penetrate at the end.

Enjoyed the story but, sadly, it’s littered with errors, you need to do some serious editing and spell checking.

Nice story. Didn't feel like it was 5 stars but it was still worth a high rating. With the constant teasing and holding off, I assumed it would been a big load