All Comments on 'Offering'

His own free will? I'm not convinced that he mind was totally clear when he agreed. It seems as though he was making decisions while under some influence. She didn't explain everything to him prior to them having sex so I wonder what his reaction will be.

Like most of us Duncan had spilled his blood many times in his life, without his consent, and there was no pleasure involved. He decided he wanted what was offered and the price was worth the risk. There is always a cost involved with sex, I am sure it was the first time he actually knew that cost before hand and had a choice. The price was just a little different than the norm. Looking forward to the next installment.

I said "very ok story" because this was a very too short story. The author had led the groundwork for a spectacular story; however, they did not take the time or effort to enhance this tale. Oh well, it was an enjoyable read. Thank you author. I look forward to your stories in the future.