by SecretSideOfClaire
Damn right! You're a STAR! Loving this second person narrative! You go, BABY!!!!
Well done story in a genre I adore! You did a great job capturing the lust with a touch of uncertainty in Claire's determined walk into his office. There was a delicious hint of vulnerability which was hot. It felt like she gathered every bit of nerve to pounce on him. Of course, that made the 'reward' that much sweeter! The greedy side of me wishes it were longer!
Very well done Claire!! I agree with the other comments as well.
Loved every paragraph! I love your writing style and your vivid detail. Found it looking for fun stories and don't regret coming to this one. I love the confidence that is portrayed, and find confidence the most sexy thing a woman can have. Great job!