All Comments on 'Office Play'

by scribe83

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JackiegirlJackiegirlalmost 19 years ago
Can we work overtime?

A truely great descriptive adventure. I read it in my office and wanted to act it out as I read!

Keep up the great efforts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Absolutely Amazing!

An extremely hot story, full of urgency and lust. I just love it when two people want each other so badly, they can't keep from fucking in the most inappropriate places.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
pictures

this story is the best but the problem is this that if u show 'PICTURES' of these action it will be much easier for the reader to imagine and much more interesting. i hope u in ur next story u will put some pics in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wish guys who write as girls would get smart and..

learn how girls think and what we like and more importantly what we dont like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What a fast fuck!

Great description and flow of the sex scenes, it's like written porn!

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