by scribe83
A truely great descriptive adventure. I read it in my office and wanted to act it out as I read!
Keep up the great efforts
An extremely hot story, full of urgency and lust. I just love it when two people want each other so badly, they can't keep from fucking in the most inappropriate places.
this story is the best but the problem is this that if u show 'PICTURES' of these action it will be much easier for the reader to imagine and much more interesting. i hope u in ur next story u will put some pics in it.
learn how girls think and what we like and more importantly what we dont like.
Great description and flow of the sex scenes, it's like written porn!