All Comments on 'Office Shock'

Nice short story, a quick and enjoyable erotic story. Perfect for a quick wank. Looking forward to you continuing the tale.

Looking forward to more.

Can't wait to read what, hopefully, will be a long, sexy, series! Keep the tights in! They may even get you a"5"!!!

great another cheating wife story. too bad there is not a section for those stories,oh wait there is.

This is gonna be harsh so please accept my apologies for my blunt reaction.

I always wonder why it's so important to set the story as a married straight woman cheating on her husband. Thats an old & rather disgusting trope. I wish you had the courage to write a real lesbian story rather than this tired & overused crap.

You've got talent. Use it to be original & creative rather than another wannabe writer posting a girlongirl story from a male-centric mind-o-lust.

Keep writing. Maybe something other than a unrealistic & unbelievable lesbian themed story would be a better direction for you.