All Comments on 'Office Subordination'

The story, itself, was well written, henceforth the "3" rating. With that being said, and being, relatively, new to this genre, the story left me "high & dry". That was because of the lack of retribution on the victims part. To me, the same camera, that caught them "goofing off", for lack of a better way of putting it, should have been the same one that gave "jerk off" his comeuppance. Then, again, maybe, that's where the sequel comes in.

@ gotrane

Thanks a lot for commentary.

But, surely, if macho characters in pornography were expected to get punished for fucking, the genre'd end up way too bloody.

Enh. This one left me cold; it would've worked better with a bit of characterisation.

I like this story. I find it clever how the reader is given a limited window into the lives of the characters. We get to see a single event in their lives, with the remainder left to the imagination.

It's a good device.

Also, retribution? I don't know about Mrs Dell, but I suspect Ms Andrews would genuinely welcome a repeat visit.

i dislike this kind of story and find it not sexual at all. It is all about power. I gave it one star

dumb