All Comments on 'Oh, Brother!'

I'd love to hear more about them.

Good start to a hot sexy tale. I hope he is not going to be too rough with Rachel. I much prefer a loving sibling couple.

It is a good begining and I hope for more from you.

More please. Keep writing.

Yes more!

Has potential, lots of scope to expand and explore the siblings wants and needs. the start is a bit rushed, it appears that this is your first story. Don't listen to any of the naysayers . PG

Decent beginning. Hopefully we get to read more about Judah breeding Rachel?

Write. Read. Post.

Always in that order, and the only short step is the post. Read several times, a few of them out loud. If you don't read, there's no point to the writing part.

That's it, no buildup, he goes from zero reaction to fucking her at the stove? What a crock.

Go for it....

Loved it. Would love a part two!

This is amazing. I do agree it seems a little rushed but this is your first story. Don't listen to any haters just keep writing.

First story but a bigger impact.

Fucking sis is dream of many. And many sisters wanna happen.

A friend of mine achieved it taking her virgin pussy. She told my sister and next week my sis seduced me and we ended in bed.

A few months later we exchanged our sisters.

Definitely do a story. My personal favorite is brother dominates little sister - no sharing with other men. Even better with breeding.

A bigger story? YES PLEASE!!!

More please 😉

It was a little fast try adding a bit more leading up to it

Outstanding and to the point. This story covered two pages of information very well. More information about each person in the story would have been more helpful to "visualize" each person's physical appearance. I think if possible getting to the point is better then dragging out the story......CHEERS

yes

Yes. I see potential in this.

That was terrible, totally lacking credibility, no sequels, please.

want more

Add a little more backstory. Don't listen to any haters you are doing wonderful!

Please keep writing I love this!

Nice short story. No parents and brother wants to breed her...add a 2nd part or more and let it happen. They can move & live as hubby/wifey!

So... When is part coming?

Yeah !! Do it

Please decide what she's making, waffles or pancakes. Not that it matters because this wasn't really worth reading.

I gave it a 3/5. It has potential, but it falls short in a number of ways. If part 2 ends up as a single page like this one, I'll be extremely disappointed that you didn't accomplish more with the full year gap between the two.