All Comments on 'Oh Daddy, Can't You See I'm Busy?'

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SoNaughtySoNaughtyover 7 years ago
WOW!

Damn I got hot reading this! Now I need sex!

peebudypeebudyover 7 years ago
the family temptress

Wow! Great story. The poor father racked with guilt over is impure thoughts for is "innocent" daughter. Can wait to find out how she traps her unsuspecting brother in her web as well.

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
Short but EXCELLENT

Hope you add another chapter. Daughter and son need more sex

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 5 years ago
Nice

Nice handling of a familiar plot line. Well written with a great foreshadowing of more to cum!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Me, too

Oh, man, what a well thought, and; as such, an equally well-written lived story. I must say, every paragraph, except maybe the church going part, was spot on because me, too. Which, tells me that you've lived it as well, so; more than just words on paper. Isn't it great? I'm 62, and the attention I receive from two daughters is amazing. Again, well done, as your 'pictures' accomplished more than their primary goal of simply engaging the reader, because me, too!

SxypkSxypkabout 4 years ago
I like it!

Mmmmm.....so hot! I am wet now and want more. Wish I had a daddy to fuck me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I UNDERSTAND the LONG PORN ADDICTIONS...

TigersmanTigersman10 months ago

Good story. I love daughter father stories. I would have really loved it had the father gotten his daughter pregnant.

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

I think things progressed too quickly with daughter instantly wanting dad to touch her...

Would have preferred her being a bit more coy....maybe teasing his view more....acting like nobody was watching.

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...