All Comments on 'Oh Daddy Pt. 01'

never write again

Like the previous comment said, never write again.

Can you write a story better????

nice concept....but writing is painting a word picture....need more detail, more relationship building....

You guys keep discouraging new writers and you'll have nothing to jerk off to after a while. Fucking homos, always want more!

Ignore the criticism and keep writing. You left me wanting more, always a sign of a good story.

Don't mind them. This is not Shakespeare and we all know it. This is literotica people in case you have forgotten. If you don't like it just move on. I loved that you went straight to the point. No blah blah blah about shit readers don't care about anyway but the chapter was super short. I was getting into it and then it was over ;)

Great to see another new writer on the site. Like the other anon I liked the 'dive in' for this piece. Well done and thank you for sharing with us.

Yes you are off to a good start. It should have been longer with more details. That being said I will be looking for the next chapter.

This was horrible. It totally was not realistic.

All you need to do is add one of the step dad's friends and I officially love you!!!!

Great start!

Don't listen to the others...

Yes, the story could gave used more lead-in, more detail... butt, it was hot, nonetheless!

Please continue!