All Comments on 'Oh, Honey'

TOTAL shit. never write again. You may have thought this was clever or something, but it wasnt. it was a mess that was damn near impossible to follow. Include other peoples dialogue or dont fucking bother writing a story. I've only been this disappointed with a story on this site once or twice before.

PATHETIC!

Unusual writing style, but I liked it. You could have went into more detail though.

I really like experiments in format beyond standard first-person or third-person-omniscient. This was handled well. Thanks for the read!

Love it - an unusual format and story, but easy to follow and comprehend, so don't worry that others (Rhulane) can't "get it"... and keep on writing.. Ignore the trolls..

LR

Dumbest story (i think it was a story) I've ever read

It's nice to read something outside the usual format.

honestly one of the best stories i’ve read on this site, i’d love a sequel

The idea of writing a story with no details other than one side of a conversation is one of the dumbest things I've ever read.

Interesting and different format. Would be better with more detail.

I think it would have been a decent story. But the one sided conversations killed it. If you do another chapter, consider the other side of the conversation or at least have some of the story detail the sex between mother and son. I couldn't get halfway through it like this. I hope this constructive criticism helps

Fun and sexy at the same time. I kept thinking the son and mom would give the sisters to dad. Guess not.

Wouldn't mind a sequel or epilogue telling how it went down afterwards.

Moms love will never goes away, you teaching very well, love it!!

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One of the better short story NTR's I have read. Would have enjoyed a bit more depth of the sister's corruption but that is the author's choice. Throughout the tale, I would read the Mom's response then fill in what the cuck husband must have said to provoke it, which made for a fairly interactive narrative despite being expressed through a singular voice. You can even decide your own general timeline. For the negative commenters, perhaps if you developed any semblance of an imagination you wouldn't need an author to baby you through every single detail of a story.

Ignore the negative comments and do a sequel to this

KInd of interesting story idea (although hugely clichéd) but the format was not really readable. Almost zero detail in a one sided conversation made this really boring.