All Comments on 'Oh Sister! When I Cum to Lie in You'

Many times things are meant to be. More mature siblings can be intimate and have a wonderful relationship. It can work out well if patient.

The best story I 've read here in many years.m

You have taken an opportunity to show off your knowledge of Japan but sadly that is full of holes, just like your knowledge of sex, all theory without any practical experience.

And this garbage -

"I felt a cool liquid spray my upper body while I shoved myself deeper into Halina. Her fingers tore aside her left labial lip as a non-viscous liquid jetted out of her vagina and showered my sweat drenched body. I felt the slight drizzle reach up to my face but the shower sprayed on my chest and abdomen."

Then you go on to tell us that this comes from her cervix and out through her pussy which at that time is full of your 8 inches long, 5 inches around, dick. Why write such crap?

I could go on but I won't.

A nice story of brother and sister reuniting and getting close again. The raw hot sexual sensations and closeness is HOT and arousing. The slow sexual play and finally reaching the high point, is great. I hope she now wants to just bang her brother long and hard to reestablish their old sexual relationship. She can show him so oriental ways of sex to climax and he can give her his huge cock and big loads to make her fulfilled and scream in strong climaxes. Please write more, thank you.

Would like to see where this story goes. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

I loved reading it. Enjoyed the long detailed lead up to sensual intimacy. Keep writing like this.

I wish there were more comments to encourage you but I, for one, have read all your back stories and look forward to more

Boring, too much showing off your knowledge of Japan. However, the Narita Express goes to Tokyo Station before Shinagawa.

were way too long winded. Found myself reading only part of each paragraph in the middle of the story. 2 and 1/2 pages max....

Bored me to tears. I couldn’t relate to any of the actions of your characters. They should have been moving towards each other but it often felt like they were running side by side with two different goals. I gave up trying to wade through this morass after you quoted the Nirvana lyric in the Paris flashback. 1/5