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"Exactly. Goody goody, we're both going to Paris." I said in a funny voice.

Sian's frown deepened, "If I was already going, then the blow job was for nothing."

"HELL NO, I just loved every second of it."

"You're a fucking creep." she cried in contempt. "Just a fucking creep."

I laughed and waved my now limp cock at her, "I know, but I'm a happily satisfied creep."

Sian glared at me, but her anger began to crack, and soon a little smile appeared on her face.

"Jesus, you're devious bastard. I just hope you realise that its winter in Paris, and I'm gonna need a complete new wardrobe. So that's gonna cost you big time."

I let the smile slide from my face and replaced it with my very worried look. Sian grinned as she got to her feet and picked her bra and top from the floor.

"And no sex until we get back either, from now on you're on rations." she added before haughtily leaving the room.

I knew she was lying, for she didn't like going without either.

For the next few days I was most smug at my deception, and I thought I'd got away with it. But I sometimes forget how devious my wife can be, usually to my detriment. On the following Saturday I arrived at the golf course for my usual competitive foursome. It's customary that the worst player over eighteen holes pays for drinks at the nineteenth. It's also customary that the other three make the most of the situation and drink as much as possible. On this particular Saturday, I removed my golf trundler from the trunk of my car to find that both wheels had been removed, by someone unknown I might add. The other three smiled it quiet satisfaction, for they knew that I was seriously disadvantaged. One of them spotted a message taped to my golf bag. It read: That's the last blow job you're ever getting. Enjoy your game. Lov S.

Of course the missing wheels and the note took a bit of explaining to my so called friends, who of course pressed me for every little detail. I left my golf bag in the car, and carried one driver, a seven iron and a putter around the eighteen holes. I played the worst game of golf in my life that day, but I wore a continuous grin all the way around that course. I imagined placing my lovely wife across my knee, removing her panties and slapping her nice round bum until she cried for mercy. I know that it would never be, but oh what a fantasy.

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ScorpioJJScorpioJJabout 2 months ago

She will cheat in the near future. Any wife who thinks a kiss with another man is "nice", is already unfaithful. He is such a wimp. He left then was concerned about the violence of her slap. Really?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The wife's behavior at the bar on the night of his return was not acceptable even though she ultimately slapped her suitor. Why did she agree to go into a such a secluded area with him? Why did she describe his initial kiss as "nice"? Do both these questions not imply her objection was more to her suitor's pace of travel rather than the destination he had in mind? Good wives do not seclude themselves with relative strangers or find their kisses appealing.

oldguy1oldguy1almost 3 years ago

good change from the usual cheating stories. lovely couple and an honest spouse wow, great.

miket0422miket0422almost 3 years ago

That was a nice change of pace. Husband home early, wife off in a secluded place at the bar with a strange guy. Seemed obvious where it was going.

The wife maneuvering herself out of a bad situation while the husband was watching was nice. It got much better quickly when she was asked what was wrong and she answered completely honestly and in detail without knowing her husband had witnessed the situation.

Very much a rarity on this site.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Surprise

Well, that was a surprise. When it began, I thought it was just another cheating wife story, but it turned into a really good Loving Wives story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I lost brain cells reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Whaaaaaaat

What kind of crap is this?

demantoiddemantoidover 12 years ago
Fun read

Nice gentle story...enjoyed. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loving Couple

What a refreshing change to have a story about a loving couple who are not cheating on each other, wanting to swap, make the hubby a wimp or wife a slut

robinhodrobinhodover 13 years ago
Thin plot...

couple are in love and entirely faithful to each other. They enjoy sex. That's about it.

Well written though. I think I'll read more stories by Bazzza and see if there are any with a bit of story.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 16 years ago
Great story

Enjoyed every word of it!! A fun couple.. Hope they stay that way!!

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 16 years ago
Marvelous

Thank you.

SalamisSalamisover 16 years ago
Wonderful

My only negative comment is that you do not write more often!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another Quite Positive Entry To Your Portfolio

A very pleasant way to end the night thanks to your talent and imagination.<P>

Admittedly, I felt his reaction was not what I expected - nor was her explanation of her slip.<P>

Your efforts are greatly appreciated as would be another in good time.<P>

With Very High Regard

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Very close to a perfect tale

Way above the norm here, but you know that. Still, I'd apply the title in a somewhat devious way, Admittedly it's a relative minor problem which I have found but for your level of writing I feel it should be mentioned. Let’s look at the details of the interaction between the wife and the friend: 1. the wife allows the 'friend' to close the intimate space up to the intimate distance of a pre kiss position, and yet the wife did not recoil from him 2. The wife took an active part in the kiss namely she kissed the friend back 3. Her arm went up towards him in a gesture of encouragement for either a longer or a closer kiss (or both). IMO it does not sit together with her minimizing report about the ‘surprising kiss’. Maybe you set up the scene to look only as an innocent incident butIMO it does not come across that way. Namely, you over did it (perhaps for dramatic purposes). As a result I was fully ready for some surprising shift in the plot and was in fact surprised when there was no surprise. A. Besides this discrepancy it was a sweet tale of a true loving couple. B. I would have certainly talked more about what EXACTLY I have seen had I been the husband and asking for full clarifications and full truth in reporting.(unless of course it the case of an unintended over doing of that scene on your part).

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 16 years ago
A very well done fantasy

A very good story. The writing is superb!

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