All Comments on '"Oh" Submission Town: A Mother Falls'

I enjoy your writing and think you created some interesting characters. For me however, you made Kim submit too quickly. You have the opportunity to ratchet up the sexual tension between mother and daughter, if you ever consider a rewrite. Have Kim resisting her daughter's commands and have Cynthia being a brazen slut in front of her Mom. Then her resistance breaks.

If anyone wA=ants to fuck me please get in touch you can have me. Cathy X

I am still wondering about how the daughter knows about the size of her dad’s cock.

This the kind of story i"m used to jasmine. A real good feel good story one that energizes ones juices.

are you makeing "Oh" Submission Town: Cum Cum Lesbian Fun or

"Oh" Submissive Town: Best Friends

I won't tell you what I did several times throughout this story! ;)

Oh Jasmin.. another great story.. again you should write more and finish this one. it may take me a while but I am now determined to read them all. Best wishes.. K… from london

awesome!

Your incest stories are sooo good, I miss my Mistress-Mommy

Ohhhhh. These stories rock my world

New to literotica, and so happy I found you!

OMG so hot can not wait to see what happens next

Improbable as the arrival of Ben in the church basement, the balance of the story was stimulating. Follow up episodes should be hot as well. Your stories now consume all of my extra time. Wish I had found you sooner. Wish there was a way to mark stories as read. Now I have to check to see if I have commented.

fantastic i always wanted to be fucked by a group and she will be now

Can't wait to read more.

Very great

Extremely hot! And, looking forward to the next chapter... and more of your other stories! I do believe that I have found my favourite writer!

The story would have been hotter if it were all lesbian.

Ridiculous, but great story. Well imagined and well written.

The potential for followup stories is unlimited. I hope you will write the next chapter.

Could be really hot, but there is zero chemistry between the daughter and the mom. The kid reads like a bully and all the swearing is juvenile. The friend and the mom are hot together. Helping her get dressed was sexier then the whole sex farce with the kid. I came here for the incest but it was meh. Too bad the friend had zero action with the mom cause all their scenes were hot and they didn't need to be swearing, name-calling bullies to achieve that.

It's now Easter 2024, perfect timing!! Twelve years late for the 2012 competition, but I hope your story pleased the judges, as it pleased me!!

I enjoyed the story.