by coaster2
As usual, another well written story. Look forward to the next chapter.
Coaster2 has decided to post some more and I for one am quite happy. He writes well and his characters are attractive and empathetic. This does read like a wet dream of a young man....
That was a great first Chapter that you wrote about Rick and his date with Astrid. I like I described her teaching Rick to become more confident in himself and how to become a good lover for her. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter with them and see how you develop the characters.
More please, I'm interested to see where you go with this. I've read nearly all you've post here om Literotica and have yet to be disappointed with story or story telling.
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Very well done enjoyed the blend of history,hesitation and eroticism... I am definately looking forwards to the next installment
Really brilliant opening story, I look forward to reading more of your stories. But they will have to be good to top this one !
Omg this was so good! I'm amazed that I came across such a well written story on this site LOL. I love it. Eroticism mixed with some good reading = PERFECT
Wonderful story, I always wait till the end to see if it continues (unlike some commentators), so panic over there is more!
Great start to the story, what will happen next??
Looking forward to see where this goes.
We all know that the path of true love doesn't always run smooth, I'm hoping for a happy ending for these two!
5 stars for story and style. Well done!
and I don't think Whitman would be disappointed, TK U MLJ LV NV
At this point of the story, she (Ice Queen) is Deb Cummings idol.
I really like the development of the characters and how this story starts to unfold.
The fact there aren’t spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes abound, allows the flow of the story to remain uninterrupted.
Last, but surely not least, so far, it’s a fully believable scenario (none of that “she relaxed her throat and was able to swallow his entire 14 inch raging erection, all the way to his hairy nut sack.” bullshit erotica.)