All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

Ok I know this is going to sound like a 14 year old kid typed it but I came 4 times from this story. It was amazing to read. The way you described each person greatly helped in the visualization. I would love to read more.

That was fucking incredible. Enjoyed the story, but that ending was a lil' bit too much for me. Great dialogue, great scenes. Wish there was a bit more to the story though. A few more scenes would've been perfect.

i loved the story one of the best i have read great plot and wonderful ending please keep writing.

This is a very kinky, and hot story, I gave it five stars!

I think of this story in real but my mom and sis won't allow that

Greatest story I've ever read and I loved every bit of it. Your should write more stories. Maybe make a book but keep going with these people. Make a series, that would be cool. I've never found a literatica series.

Very good story I liked it very much, Please write to concoude this one How kids did end up having .

Great work I love the whole storyline. I really think you should do one where it's 10 years later and the had more kids and the kids started to fuck the parents and so on, it would be great read. And with your artistic taste of story writing im sure you can make that idea turn out to be a masterpiece.

Additionally, your writing style could use a bit more work. When referring to the characters from another character's point of view you used a direction that didn't really fit. For instance you were writing from Patty's perspective talking about Chrissie as being Bobby's mother. Could just say 'their mother'. That way it fits better. If you're going for the omnipotent perspective, like you were writing, absolutes work well there, also.

Can't wait to read more of your work.

Scale

and complicated incest tale-very erotic, good sex scenes thanks

Mr anonymous needs to stop reading if he doesn't like your style as for myself I Looooooooooooooooooooove it please continue

Fuck thats all i can say that was wonderful i cumed like 4 times thanks

One of the best of the best!

ThankYouVeryMuch!!

Just beautiful

Thanks, for such a touching and beautifully written story. Though I don't wish to go into details, it hits very close to home, and the heart. A continuation would be great.

Thanks,

Kept me hard the whole time I was reading it

Keep writithese, they're fricking good

I gotta go take care of sum thin...

This made me sooooo wet....kept me cumming till the end, I loved it!

Thanks for a very wonderful story - I am a husband in very similar circumstances

I've read this story many times and still think it's one of your best and one of the best on this site. Please keep writing.

I can't believe people are turned on by this.

I have just began a similar sexual relationship......cannot get enough

Really good one of the best I've read!!!

I just loved that story and sure wish that I could have ben that lucky.

I must tell you that I am a male and I just met a really great married guy who I love to suck. At first I used to get him to fuck his wife and then come over to my place and let me suck him with both their juices still on his cock. Well now we are all three moved in together and reaslly enjoying each other. We plan on having a child as soon as possible. Money is not a factor.

I always wonder if the beautiful sexual unions are fictional or real. Some probably are biographical and some fictional. You tell it so well. I choose to believe that it really happened and one of them felt compelled to share it. I wished for something similar when I was young.

The only thing missing was a little mommy daughter action. Very hot story

I was enthralled with this tory.

I perhaps could have fucked my mother, but I'm not positive. She was an alcoholic who lived for her beer. She was a terrible mother who passed at age thirty eight from uremic poisoning.

She finally coerced my daddy into getting her a chamber pot so she didn't have to go upstairs to pee. Sometimes I had to help he walk twenty feet to the pot so she could pee. She was so drunk she would have fallen down. I saw her pussy a lot of times and she seldom wore panties. They just got in the way when she needed to pee.

Onr night she was in here bed reading and drinking beer when I came in. She, for ssome reason, haad on a cut out bra, garter belt and full fashioned stocking and an opaque yellow nightgown, but no panties. She asked me to give her a back rub.

I had her roll on her stomach, told her I was unhooking her bra and garter belt so I could rub all of her back. I took lotion and warmed it in my hands and proceeded to begin rubbing her back. I even went down to her upper thighs just above her stocking tops. I asked her if she wanted her butt massaged too. She told me to go ahead, so I rubbed her ass and slipped my hands down onto the inside of her thighs. She just told me to be careful.

I asked her if she wanted her belly rubbed too and she thought for a minute and said that would feel good too. Whn she turned over, her teats fell out of her cut out bra and I saw her cunt close up. I began massaging her belly, then moved up to her teats, then down to her lower belly. She parted her legs and told me I could rub her cunt if I wanted to.I played with her hair and her cunt lips then told her I was done.

she simply told me I did a good job and it felt very good She turned back ove I ad I re hooked her garter belt, but she told me to leave her bra unhooked and took it off. I think I really could have given her a good fucking that night. I'll never know because I didn't.

Absolutely so hot. If that wouldn't turn you on, I don't know what it would take. Makes me wish I had a brother so we could fuck.....and fuck......and fuck.

Dude your a good writer. To be honest though could've been a little more clear on who was talking. And just for future references ALOT of Americans read these so try saying mom instead of mum and edit a little better. Other than that, this was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Thanks for the experience man,

All fiction comes from truth.

I know for a fact, this story has happen all over the world at different times,

in the past, and it does happen in the present.

Awsome hot story please follow up with more of this story maybe him fucking his daughter in a few years

Great story. As an innocent teen I spent a Labor Day weekend at my aunts house at the Thousand Islands. More people than figured showed for the holiday so I slept in my Aunt's bedroom. She came in to get dressed as I was standing there naked and she became my first. This is the first time I have said anything about this, and she was always eager for me to visit summer after summer till I got married.

You really need a follow up because this story was so good I cried. And fucked myself, then cried some more.

That was amazing! I am a boy and I have always had sexual fantaseize about my mother and sister. My dad left when I was nine and my sister was six so now that I'm older I found it easier to suduce my mom. This story gave me the courage to tell my sister and mom about my sexual fantasies and now I am the happiest I have ever been because I now live with my mom and sister and I fuck them everyday, so THANKYOU and keep writing!!

I fucked my mom and sister not together but years apart. My sister knows about my mom but my mom don't know about my sister. it was fun!!

Makes me want to try and seduce my older sister. I've fantasized about doing it with her for a couple of years now. But yeah you should make a follow up story though.

So fucking hot

I ate my sister out all night

An oldie but a goodie. Very hot and sexy. Could stand to have a good editor run through it, though, and tidy up some of the errors. There were a number of grammatical mistakes along with Patty calling her brother "Jimmy" instead of "Bobby".

I will never look at my brother the same again...I like that ;)

I remembered reading this story some time ago. Imagine 642 comments. I did not go thru all of them but the majority seems well in your favor. My compliments, again.

Thanks Don

I really enjoyed your story. I could picture the beach, the women in their full splender. God it turned me on overload. Thank you, again great job.

i will never look at my sisters the same ever again... oh well... its s not so bad ;)

NIce one , very well narrated , words oozing out with love , sex and passion...

This was truely amazing!! Never read anything like it. My compliments!!

I read this a few years ago, but it's just as good the second time. Your pacing is perfect, and character development is great.

I've always been impressed by your stories. I hope you have written mainstream, as well.

Softly and most sensualy written, giving a believable and enjoyable story.

Love is love and shouldn't be ignored or taken lightly. For it's the greatest gift we small beings are bestowed, and is best when shared. Spread the Love.

Excellent well wrîtten thought out story I enjoyed it so much

Its a very sexy story, written with good grammar thus making it an easy and more enjoyable read. One criticism though, regarding smoking the joint, you said, ....'everyone tries it at least once.' I didn't; and I was a teeanger through the 'hippy days' of The Swinging Sixties. As a life-long 'non-smoker' I find it incongruous to imagine any non-smoker even trying a joint. More commonly non-smokers find the actual act of smoking so repugnant they/we wouldn't, couldn't, even contemplate the act. Sorry, I got carried away. That aside though I loved your sexy, well written, story. Regards from SouthLondon.

I've read this story a while back and I loved it then and still love it, it would be one of my best stories that I've got around to reading, but one complaint like from South Londoner, even though I'm a smoker I've never had a joint, the smell of them was bad enough so i never had the urge to try one. But other than that no other worries from me.

The two complainers about the joint smoking need to remember that comments made by a character in a story are just that. I certainly never have smoked one and don't advocate it either, but a story is a story and writers of murder mysteries don't normally get flack for putting murderous thoughts in a character's head! My only thought about the story is that the characters were only thinly sketched out, and there was a lot of room for fleshing them out much more and expanding on their thoughts, both of which can add enormously to the eroticism of the writing. A sexy read nonetheless. Thank you.

This is a wonderful story and I love it

Thank you

You are a excellent author wonderful writer

Thanks

This was an amazing story. It was written unbelievably well, although I wish you could've added a little more sex and been more descriptive of it. Also, when I think about it this story kind of weirdly haunts me knowing that these people are being controlled by sex, wanting only sex forever and always, like some sort of Greek legend or curse. I guess I can't really call it a curse because it is what they want, but I'm wondering if it's really what they want or if it's the pleasure controlling them and I guess that it feels unjust to leave the story on this note; people stuck in a trance not being able to do the things they might rather be doing and living their life the way they would've preferred.

You made a very sexy read. I was very turned on reading the story no matter that it was an improbable story. The sisters part was slightly more of a better progression. Adding the mom was a stretch of the imagination, especially the double wives arrangement. Also the characters could be better fleshed out. Overall a great story and I gave it 5 stars!

I too read this story sometime ago and gave it 5 stars, only because I couldn't give it 10 stars...... It's got the two hottest incest fantasies in one story.... I used to dream about this even before I knew it was incest because both my mother and sister were hot and I would have "married" them both and lived happily ever after but there was my little brother and my father so it could have never happened.

However, I still dream about it even though today I'm Bi and most of the sex I have is gay but that's simply because it's easier to have a man visit you or you visit a man and no one really thinks anything about it, unless they happen to be inside the house at the same time. Of course the same is true of women visiting women.

I still read mother/son and sister/brother incest over 50 years later and it still gets me excited. And this story is still one of the best I've read.

Please keep writing like this........

One of the most exciting story that I ever read. Had a hard on almost the entire story.

10/10 - IGN

I too wish there were a scale of 10. But, I'll just say its one I've really enjoyed. You've written some about rape, which caused me to be very disappointed in you. But this is well done. Their characters seem to get along very well, even though their sexual desires are the ones primarily explored here. I can see a mother and daughter shareing a man. Mommy can love him deeply and fearlessly knowing that her daughter will have a good father and that when she's gone, (as she must know she will die first) her love will not be left alone. Obviously, they are sexually very compatible and are very open minded to any topic. The daughter, Patty, (surprisingly) seems to be the most conservative of the group instead of the Mommy- or Chrissie. Patty will probably be the stabilizing force that will hold this unusual family together. This is a wonderful story. Thank You.

though none of us would want that to happen in our life. still you made me the male character and made me fall in love with sister with my mother's permission. lol.

great piece of art. heart touching really

Although, I knew a kid in high school who was supposedly fucking his sister and his mother. I also knew, maybe 10 other or so people throughout my life who were involved in incest.

A lot of unusual things happen in the world of incest. I just would never would count out any variation in that world.

I bet that most males have lusted after their mothers and/or sisters. Not everyone is fortunate to find their soul mates in them. Nice story. Pleasant people and it seems this family will work out ok. It's not a foregone conclusion that mom will die first. With car wrecks and stuff, anyone can go first. In this family, the children still have two adults left.

While a bit far fetched, it's not out of the realm of possibility. People are just crazy enough to get together like this and crazy enough to make it work. Good job.

I loved your story but you could have taken more time to develop your characters. Some of the early part of it seemed contrived and almost coincidental to your story line. There was so much more you could have done with it to make it an even better read.

Good luck with your future writing endeavors

damon

(S)couries has, as is usual, outdone himself once again. The Coursey family is united in love, committment, oaths, spirit and souls! The matriarch of the family is Christine, the core of their love, the center of their universe; she greases the three-spoke wheel of their mutual beings. This story is not about lust, wantonness, sluttiness nor lewd pornography! It is about romance and a family "wedded" for life and dedicated to their unity, family and each other!

Mother Christine and her son Bobby are new parents, mother and father, of Stephanie, the third child of mother Chrissie and second sibling of Bobby and Patty, the daughter of Bobby and (and also his mother) Chrissie, sister of Bobby and Patty, granddaughter of Chrissie and niece of Patty (whow)! Expectedly, Chrissie's daughter and Bobby's sister Patty is now pregnant by her brother Bobby as the father; maybe she'll have twins in about seven or so months!!

The writer has written a very good saga of this illuminating family. the character's are cast in pleasurable roles and play their parts exceptionally. The dialogue is also very well written; the context and theme of the story is somewhat unusual allowing some believeability and reality of the story. Another gigantic hit by 'scouries', for myself and nearly seven hundred other commenting Literotica mother/son, brother/sister procreation, incest-loving readers!!!

I've read this story a couple of years ago but by someone else

wow...very romantic and hot at the same time.

i also have read this one on another site...xhamster...

Perfect for me.

Your doing a gray job keeping us wanting more keep it up

Jack

Whoa, what a dream!

At this point I dont care if the story has any truth to it .I just liked how it kept me hard as a rock keep it up as I am .....great writing

I remember my Dreams

that baby shit was to much .....crazy . and your my wife now...lol 2 stars

JIMMY!

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I thought the story was very erotic and loving...

Incest can be the greatest love between the sexes. This story is a classic

I was rock hard reading it and shot a huge load of cum as my thoughts drifted.

a lot of true love involved in it.

do you have a follow up story on the three and there children

Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

i think this story is my favorite. i've read it at least a hundred times. i hope u post more stories. i read your stories always.your my favorite author

A+

A*

one of the best i have ever read i hope you add more to the story later it was full of love passion and feelings over all a great story

ooh my gosh, feel lyk i wanna fuck some1

This was pretty decent. The sex scene wasn't that hot...but sex is hard to write,but I liked the teasing the easy feeling,the conversation... You portrayed emotion and character well. Got me stiff.

Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD

Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD

Maybe this story doesn't really apply to the real world, but, if that ever happened, both of the children would be mentally and/or physically disabled.. Besides that, it was a good story. i guess it's a good thing that you didn't decide to make your characters have retard babies, it's good to stick to the fairy-tale side of things sometimes.

Yummy! It was delicious!

I got a little jealous when he wanted to pick the mother over patty!

Great fantasy. Good build up, not repetitious, intelligently written, and hot in the right places.

This is a wonderful story. A little quick on the draw, but they all evidently knew what they wanted. You know, contrary to what a previous commentor said, the children of incest today have little chance of disability. Many years ago, when the world was 'smaller', People in a given geographical area were often more closely related than today. In today's world, bloodlines are not so linear. Remember our ancestors who landed on Ellis Island came from literally all over the world and many before that who landed in various places on the east coast from wherever. It also takes more than one instance of incest to begin producing troubles in the gene pool. I really want to squash the idea that love between family members immediately produces deformity. Its just not so. Chrissy and Patty are obviously very much in love with Bobby and he them. Though it probably isn't, I'd like to hope that this is at least based on a true to life family.

More please

At least the third or fourth time, I've read it! It gets hotter every time, so I go back to your story list and enjoy even more of your tales!

Could you maybe do something in the future about the baby Steph growing up in that environment and also maybe have it so that Bobby has sex with her.

All it needs is something with Steph

would really like an non erotic story were they tell their children whne they are of age about their relationship.

wish I had family could get this close would love to unite together never desire my mom but have a sister have always wanted to be with just like this

Lots of foreplay leading up to the event then it was slam-bam, sis & mom, and both becoming his wife and pregnant with no prelude into this mindset progression. From virgin to wife in near lightening speed, unreal, missing much.

And all these incest family pregnancies stories never address how the new baby birth certificate (listing father) is handled. Unreal.

I loved it and I never even though about doin incest until last week then I had f***** my cousin and man was it good just reading this story takes me off in to a deep high like nothing else could . In a one word description WOW.

Dear Writer,

The name is Thorn Woods. I have to say this story was fúcking AMAZING. I find incest stories so interesting. I don’t know why but they seem just so hot and erotic and make my body feel all tingly, lmao. I don’t know if you have ever heard the website/app called Wattpad. That’s where I write my stories and erotic one shots. I have no idea if you’re going to read this let alone see it but you should totally check out the site. I think you’ll love it as much as I do. If you’d ever like to contact me my email is GoddessOfMaddness@gmail.com.