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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Smiles

I hope you still spread loving thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good.

Intro a bit long but an excellent story. Well done.

Omart57Omart57over 6 years ago
Great

Loved it, a great story! I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
R

Great! I am not a reader but I love the pace in which nothing was rushed.

jorgenhenryjorgenhenryabout 6 years ago
Mom and me

YesI did the same, it was so wonderful when my 16 year old cock entered my mother's lovely hole, her warm and greasy cunt. I also was moaning mommy oh mommy I love you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome

I also did that with my sister and my mother...exept I didn't say, ohhh.......mommy, I said oh fuck. But my ister said oh......mommy when she licked her wet, warm, pussy. But at the same time, she was throbing my hard dick. But when I got back from tbe trip I broke up witb her. She was pretty pissed at me. And to this day, I don't regret anything, because now I have my toddler, Sophie. And I love her with all of my heart. ♡

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
looks promising

how many did the mom and son have ( in babies ) and brother and sister have ( babies ) is what i'd liked to know , did innie ( any ) of them have twins , , or triplits I am kinda guessing mom did . .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
LIKE IT VERY MUCH. I AM DEFINITELY NOT THE ONLY ONE: 7,638,087 VIEWS, 2,285 FAVORITES.

I will check your other stories when i get a chance.

Sapper257Sapper257almost 6 years ago
Memories

This reminded me of my sexual awakening when I was 15. I joined the Army as a Boy Soldier to learn an Apprenticeship. We had the same long holidays as schools and terms were the same Christmas, Easter and Summer.

Used to spend a lot of time at home with Mum and would often walk about in only my underpants. Dad once mentioned I should cover up in front of Mum and also said "sometimes neighbours popped in", not that I noticed.

Mum said when Dad was out of earshot "Don't worry about your Dad he's only jealous because you have a nicely developing body Brian" she chuckled "just be careful please".

"Okay Mum" and smiled "the Army is building us up with all the exercise and sport.

In the summer leave I was walking about in a swimming costume. Dad never said anything but commented once "Be careful old Mrs. Jones doesn't see you, she'll have a heart attack", he said jovially.

Mum joked "Not just old Mrs. Jones son, anybody younger as well who appreciates a young muscular body" Mum smiled, then without Dad hearing "some of my girlfriends could be interested".

Another day with Dad being at work and being in my underpants I said to Mum cheekily "Do you have that list of your girlfriends that might be interested in my body" with a smile.

Mum said "You have plenty of time for girlfriends when you have finished your apprenticeship Brian" then with a smirk on her face said "you're not interested in older woman are you with all the young girls around, are you?"

"Weeeeell Mum .........." I smiled "what is it they say 'don't knock it till you've tried it', some of your mates are okay".

"You're growing up Brian, no female will be safe around you" Mum said with a smile.

"You're not looking so bad yourself Mum, you scrub up well" I said grinning.

"Thank you kind sir, don't receive complements from your Dad any more" and Mum lifted her skirt up almost to her thigh and wiggled her bottom at me with a big smile on her face.

"Tart" I said jovially.

"I could be" Mum said grinning and flashing her eyelids, "if only I was 20 years younger".

Jokingly but with an element of truth I stuttered "Well you could undo a couple of buttons on your blouse".

Mum stood ridged looking at me, thought I was going to turn into a pillar of salt for what seamed like a lifetime but a few seconds and raised her hands to the top of her blouse. Still starring at me started undoing the top button, then the next till all were unbuttoned. Now I could see her pink bra, I had a stirring in my underpants. Mum pulled her blouse open and bent forward exposing a lot of her cleavage, saying "Happy, is that enough Brian".

"Mum you are beautiful" I whispered.

Mum started pulling her blouse together "Don't" I said followed by "please".

"I'm your Mum, you're My Son" Mum stammered "but looking at the twitching in your underpants Brian do I mean something else to you?"

"Yes" I stuttered "I love you".

"As a lover, Son or both?" with a pregnant pause "I've noticed you looking at my breasts and legs".

"Both Mum".

"I've also been naughty and aloud you to look up my dress when crossing my legs, you might have seen my knickers and worn low cut blouses and dresses so you could see my breasts. I know I shouldn't have encouraged you but it gave me a thrill like I've not had for a long time and enjoyed the banter".

I walked towards Mum and because her blouse was open put my arms around her waste and hugged her. I gave her a quick peck on the lips.

Mum said smiling "Is that the best you can do Son" putting her arms around pulled me to her saying "Oh" as she felt my stiffy pressing into her tummy then rubbed her tummy over my now very hard penis.

As we came together our lips kissed and like lovers. Mum opened her mouth so I did, "You're learning My Boy" she said.

With the kiss I moved my hands up Mum's back to her bra and fumbled trying to undo it.

"You need more practice Boy" laughing "squeeze the clip together and it should ping open, have another go while kissing me Brian".

We had another passionate kiss now with me poking my hard-on into Mum's tummy but still to no avail with the bra clip.

We broke or kiss and Mum said "Want me to do it Brian?"

"No" and squeezed Mum's breast over her bra for a short while. Put my hands back round Mum's waste then ran my hands over Mum's bottom and pulled her bottom on to my stiffy. Mum gave out a moaning sound from her throat, thought "I must be doing something right" I was pleased with myself.

Feeling more adventures started pulling Mum's skirt gradually up to her bottom while holding her cheeks onto my stiffy. When the skirt was over her bottom I felt her knickers and warm flesh.

Mum whispered "Result" and continued kissing. Pleased I'd achieved, found the top of her knickers and placed my right hand inside. Waiting for a while Mum broke the kiss and said "You wont receive a written invitation Brian" and carried on kissing.

I slapped Mum's cheek with my free hand that was received with an "ow" from Mum. Running my hand over Mum's hip and around to her tummy we parted to give me access to her lower regions. At the same time Mum took her arm from around me and placed her hand on my underpants and over my penis. I shuddered inched my hand into Mum's pubic area. Mum caressed my penis and said "If this is all text book stuff and Lads Mags you'll find what your searching for very damp through my pubic hair".

"Mum I'm almost cumming".

Mum removed her hand saying "Don't want you cumming too soon as I want some fun".

With that my fingers found Mum's virgina as she said very damp, Mum parted her legs to give me better access saying "Is that better Son" and groaned "Now raise the palm of your hand so your finger caresses my clitoris". Soon Mum murmured "Wonderful, just play with the nub until I climax, don't think it will be long". Mum buried her head in my shoulder "Keep going My Boy" and placed her hand back on my penis inside underpants caressing me.

"Mum I don't want to cum like this".

"Don't worry Brian" mumbling "I'm nearly climaxing then ill make you cum and you will quickly recover then we can continue in bed". With that Mum's legs buckled and climaxed onto my hand". Breathing heavily Mum said "That's been a long time since that happened" and kissed me hard while I removed my hand from her knickers. Mum's hand carried on caressing my stiffy saying "cum for me I want so much more from you my beautiful Brian" and within a very short while shot my load into Mum's hand and underpants. Mum kept the motion going until I was drained.

Mum cried with pleasure as I kept pumping my cum into her hand. "Thank you so much My Son, you've made me so happy", wiping the tear from her eye we kissed.

As our breathing subsided Mum said "Now lets go to bed for the main course. You will soon be hard again as you know and I remember then we can make love the rest of the day and fall asleep, what do you say Brian?"

"Sounds good to me, I'm twitching already Mum" I boasted followed by "what's for desert?"

"I'll think of a treat you will like, if you're not sound asleep and you still need tuition undoing my bra as my breasts need some attention" Mum said so joyfully.

"I'm sure you are a good teacher Mum" I replied giving her a kiss.

"I'll have to do some remembering and with the books under your bed we'll make it work. Brian my knickers are saturated and that's not happened for a long time, your pants are sodden with cum you naughty boy and I love it".

"I will carry you upstairs, throw you on your bed and remove your knickers to see your pussy ready for action Mum. While I'm practising undoing your bra to caress your breasts and suck your nipples I'd better be hard again, or you are sacked!"

"You could smack my bottom, gently Brian for being a naughty girl".

I chucked Mum on the bed and grabbed Mum's knickers on the bounce and slid them down her thighs viewing her virgina as they slid past her knees, calf's, ankles and feet to the floor. "Spread them Mum, I ordered".

"You are so domineering Son".

I removed my underpants my only remaining clothing by which time my penis was about 90 degrees.

Mum noticed and said "See, told you so big boy" as Mum opened her legs then teasingly with a smile on her face raised her knees giving me the full view of her hairy pussy and my penis was now nearly pointing to the ceiling.

"Happy my soldier man?" not replying as I was climbing on to the bed between Mum's legs she closed her legs and lowered her knees, saying "Bra training first Son" and span round on the bed removing her blouse.

I soon mastered the clip, the quick nipping of the 'hook and eye' together, releasing the elasticated bra strap and releasing Mum's breasts. I easily slipped her bra over her shoulders and down her arms to be discarded on to the floor near her saturated panties.

Mum took off her skirt and saw Mum in all her glory, naked as the day she was born. "Well, will I do Brian, I see your cock is almost vertical. Do you want to impale your cock inside your Mother and start a full relationship with me, I do so its a no brainer, the amount of pre-cum cumming from your purple head I want it inside me".

"I'm only here to serve, teach me please Mum, or would you rather I called you by your Christian name?"

"No Brian, that is for your father, not very often, you call me Mum or Mother I don't mind and call it out loud but not when Dad's around. We after all mother and son, which will never change" Mum stated, "One last thing", pointing to her pussy "I don't want this being called any nasty words you might hear in the Army. Your Dad said it once and lived to regret it. This, my hairy pussy you can have looking as you like, bushy, trimmed, a runway or bold. The choice is yours, you can shave it for me that turns me on and I then make love like a bitch on heat. We will work through all the different positions in time and last but not least you can't make me pregnant. When I'm disposed I will satisfy your needs one way or another. Soon ill be available 24/7 365 days a year so your leaves from the Army will be well taken care of. Now make love to me in the Missionary Position Brian, Son, Soldier".

That's how our sexual relationship started and we still have fun.

Enjoyed relating my memories.

REgards

scouriesscouriesalmost 6 years agoAuthor
40,000 VOTES!!! And counting...

This story was published on LITEROTICA in December of 2006 - almost 12 years ago. Since then, as one commenter recently pointed out, it has received over seven and a half million reads and has been favorited over 2800 times. And i’ve been delighted to read the over 800 comments that have been posted on it.

This week when I checked my authors page I noticed that the story had just received its FORTY THOUSANTH VOTE. And in doing so it had become only the second story in the long history of the site to reach this number. I want to take this opportunity to thank every reader who has taken the time to provide me feedback (whether by voting, favoriting either me or the story, or by voting). It’s greatly appreciated.

When I first submitted the story I never dreamed it would be this successful. These numbers are just more proof of the incredible power of the internet and the ability it gives any author to reach and entertain readers from one end of the earth to the other.

I read the story last night for the first time in many years. I enjoyed it - it made me smile! And while my stories are “fiction” they almost always include leading characters who are based on people i’ve encountered in one way or another in my past. And rereading my stories almost always evokes memories of these past encounters.

And when i’m reading these older stories I also can’t help but project my characters into the future. By the time i’d finished reading this one I knew exactly what had happened to mom, her daughter and her son over the last 12 years. Where they now lived, how many children they’ve had, etc., etc. I probably won’t write or publish the next chapters of their lives but it was delightful to revisit them again.

Thanks again everyone,

Jim a.k.a Scouries

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Oh Mommy

I loved that story. I hope you have some more like it.

ksjediksjedialmost 6 years ago
Good story

Really enjoyef the story. Such loving characters so well written really enjoyed this story.

OOAAOOAAalmost 6 years ago
FANTASTIC story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mom......

I also wanted to be fucked by my own mommy who is a gorgeous busty woman. I dreamt about her fucking me hard on top of me......this story just added fire to my imagination. Great!!! I wish I could be her son.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it

I loved your story. It is all my fantasy.

Happyman47Happyman47over 5 years ago
Great story

You told this story so well I read it twice. I'm sure I'll read it again. I was so hot I wish I was as lucky as Patty and Christine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

One of the most amazing stories I’ve ever seen. Someone should make a movie with the story. Thanks K17

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good pacing, content. Editing minus

Never neverland.

olblueyesolblueyesover 5 years ago

well written, well paced, loved it, one of the best romantic incest tales I've read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So wet!

I honestly played while reading when Bobby fucked his mom. Came twice and still throbbed as I finished the story! It was a fantastic one! However I am surprised that Patty didn’t get pregnant first. Oh well, she did eventually I guess. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

delicious

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A Nice Story

Nicely done1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
ONE OF YOUR BEST, FOR SURE

Thanks for sharing your *fertile* imagination with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Still a good read

Still enjoyed reading this story now whn some time ago I came across yr story here...and comparable to others your story stands within the best three authors I came across here.

Immensely enjoyed the storyline....good flow.....sexually aroused....good ending.

Tq

TallManReinventedTallManReinventedalmost 5 years ago
One or two clichés but...

Still a fun read, despite one or two clichés and spelling mistakes. On the whole, nicely written, as others say here. Go for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fuuuuck

Well written, Wow well done, Lots of light and shade, building......

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
BRAVO!!!!BRAVO!!!!

More chapters neened, a lot more. well written very nice....... THANKS

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 5 years ago
Excellent

What a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing this and many of your others. Exactly the kind of story that ticks all my boxes. 5*

guiltypleasureloverguiltypleasureloveralmost 5 years ago
So great

I've read this story a couple times before. Great pacing, great imagery.

A sequel would be great

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
How often....

I've stumbled across your story three times now. It deserves a 5 star rating! Sorry, but I'm a little slow on the uptake. Truly a realistic story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I never called her mommy, it was always mom

I called out mom a lot as I was cumming deep in her pussy. My mom never called me son either, it was always by my name Greg. "Oh mom, I love fucking your pussy," I'd say. "Oh Greg, I love your cock, fuck me harder baby," my mom would respond.

Gary4everGary4everover 4 years ago
Great story!

Really good story. I was stroking my cock by the 2nd page. hahaha

tiercenpttiercenptover 4 years ago
very good story

very nice "short" story. wasn't even a stroker story as for usual for the shorter ones.

you somehow managed to fit an "entire" story into three pages. as of right now finishing your story I don't have any feeling you missed something a potential storyline or forgotten mention (Cathy).

only thing what confused me was the change from Mom to Chrissie and to mom again. she said "you shouldn't call ur mom like that" (although not insistently enough) and he kept calling her chrissie shortly after without anything from her. and then little later mom again?

only thing I thought was kinda confusing.

nonetheless 5 Stars.

a rarity to have such a short story and yet so "fullfilling".

Great job

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
love

loved this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Merry Xmas

It's been a long time since you wrote it and I see many people still like it. It's well written and but this is one of those that could have been a lot longer developing in a more believable way. Of course we all want our moms and sisters to fall in love with us and say yes right away, but at least in my case it took a long time...

MidKnight1378MidKnight1378about 4 years ago
Very nice story...

I kept expecting Bobby to wake up at the end and realized he dreamt all of it. I like your ending better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very good story

Thanks for the good story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Excellent job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Truly Awesome Story!

I love the way you built up the story and then brought it all together at the end. Please keep writing and submitting your wonderful stories!

rightbankrightbankabout 4 years ago
Living Happily Ever After

is special

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sensual and tender

Sexy...satisfied my need for story with deep love. Thanks for the sweetness

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
The front of the cabin faced the breaking waves of the ocean across a swath of white sand.

"Swath of white sand" to the Atlantic??

I better go check. Sounds like rising water levels have flooded out the building, or they are about to! Probably these folks knew about global warming before most of us!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
complete enjoyment

the way you wrote this beautiful story is totally awesome -- you really made each character to become 'real' -- you took your time and made this a short novel -- brought me higher and higher as I read more -- no BS or exaggeration of your size or the woman's size also -- you gave us a well written love story that I would love to have been in myself -- please keep writing

Shane279Shane279almost 4 years ago
Great

a little rushed could have added some more detail but overall great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sex, but lots of love!!

I enjoyed every bit of this story. I like the sudden everybody nude part and thought that sharing a joint between all of trhem was a nice touch. I deep down enjoyed the freedom and desire of the women to be impregnated. When i dated in my late teens and 20’s, I usually had a desire to seduce their mothers!! Oedipus complex? PROBABLY.Leaving my email address if you ever care to reply! bracedoc123@comcast.net

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Reminds me of my similar experience

Although mine isn't with my mother and sister. It is with my wife and her sister. The love actually grew over time.

newtype2525newtype2525over 3 years ago
a true love story!

Thank you for this gift!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Almost a 5

Your story was Very well written with only a few grammatical errors. I would have given you a five but for one exception. When Bobby took Patty for the first time, there was NO foreplay in the story at all! No kissing, no oral, no build up. It was like here we are and in it goes - in one push none the less - in a supposed virgin. The remainder of the story was excellent for the most part, and I liked the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
warm and loving

how sweet, good read for the warmth i felt in my nipples and tummy

good feelings you draw out

t/ y

J

f4nt4syp3nf4nt4syp3nover 3 years ago

This is one of my favorites. I keep coming back and re-reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wow

i can imagine bobby's daughter fucking bobby , his mom and Patty and all other characters in story xd

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 3 years ago

""Ohhh Mommy," I Groaned:" - Eighteen Year Old Brother/Son, Bobby Coursey and Nineteen Year Old Virgin Sister/Daughter, Patty Coursey and Thirty-six Year Old Mother, Christine (Chrissie) Coursey. It's been seven plus (7+) years since I first read this story and (six [6] years since I last read this story. The last time I read this story I referred to Bobby inadvertently as "Billy." The story reads better in every aspect--in my opinion--than each previous time. As of this reading there are eight hundred fifty-two (852 as of 0236 AM, November 21, 2020) ) comments, and I've just read most all of them! There was probably five (5) outright negative, a couple of them even nasty, comments of the current total. That's an awesome approval of ninety-nine point four percent (99.4 %) ratio!! Honestly, I can say that Jim 'scouries' is Da' Man!!! And I've enjoyed each and every one of his stories that I've the pleasure to read. I take this opportunity to offer him my deepest appreciation for his contributions to his reader's here on 'Literotica' and also 'storiesonline' and also to the beauty and difficulties of actual incest love, and lovers, his respect of his characters, and their romance exuded....and lastly to the greatest pleasure of we many incest lovers!!!.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Kept me coming back

One if the best stories of tabboo I've read. Each time it caused a strain in my jeans that only Patty or her mom could fix. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Two thumbs, and one cock up

One of the best stories I've read I. A long time. I loved every second of it.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
I just

love, love, love a happy ending. It's like an erotic Hallmark movie.

HuskyoneHuskyoneover 3 years ago

Great story with a happy ending.

lovedefactolovedefactoover 3 years ago

This was a GREAT story with a fabulous ending. Couldn't stop until I finished reading it. You have become one of my favourite authors!

sixfoot4sixfoot4over 3 years ago
Horny tale

Very believable, easy to imagine the events and sexual action. A good result for me with three good jos.

stillwant2tryitstillwant2tryitover 3 years ago
Loved

So enjoyable to read!

rbell42rbell42over 3 years ago
Thank you

One of the top stories that I have ever read. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

mlf4umlf4uabout 3 years ago

Ah,sweet 💘 love!

Rancher46Rancher46about 3 years ago

Great incest story. It needs another chapter. 5++stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More than fantastic thank you

TigersmanTigersmanabout 3 years ago

Loved this story. This has always been my fantasy especially after hearing all my friends saying how hot my mother looked.

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 3 years ago

Great story Jim. Loved it, who's a lucky boy then.

NovaMNovaMabout 3 years ago

Hi Jim. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I have read it before, years ago.

I reread it today and I had just as much fun reading it as I did way back then. Well done.

I am going to check out the rest of your stories.

Bye *

SoNaughtySoNaughtyabout 3 years ago

I loved this story and a guy and I use to talk about having a family like this together.

WSpeare61WSpeare61about 3 years ago

Fantastic emotional rollercoaster of a story. Well done and it is one of my top 3 favourite stories so far. It had the 3 must have for any story regardless of the topic, A Beginning/Start. A Middle/ Center and an End/Finish. The story had all 3 and were well key elements to have a fluid continuity with an emotionally charged, erotically sinful atmosphere. Look forward to more.

Michael4489Michael4489about 3 years ago

very nice story great ending

Ishare69Ishare69about 3 years ago

Enjoyed it. Good emotional read.

Eddiejoe7Eddiejoe7about 3 years ago

Like the details describing panties and public hair. Arousing reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I'm still hard after stroking myself to an amazing orgasm 4 minutes ago. It so exciting impregnating her mother.

AmariaBlackAmariaBlackabout 3 years ago

I love the love story because you gave me a happy ending. I also love it that you made male/female a lot and not a lot of female/female.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fuck I came hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I fucking squirted. I wish my brother could fuck me like this

AsgarthAsgarthalmost 3 years ago

I liked this story a lot. How about some more?

mnix3245mnix3245almost 3 years ago

Extremely improbable plot that lacked character development and moved far too quickly. Yet, as an erotic story, it proved successful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a wonderful, sensuous story. Told in as it would naturally occur between three loving individuals. I could almost feel the desires of the three of them as nature's urges drew them to mutual sexual satisfaction. Simply told without embellishng what nature provided to each of the individuals. No bragging about penis size or magnitude of the females' orgasms. MORE PLEASE.

Royse69Royse69almost 3 years ago

great story

it wasnt rushed, it was warm loving and very enjoyable

I really would like another chapter at least

Thank you

wish_thinkerwish_thinkeralmost 3 years ago

Absolutely wonderful, well written, full of love. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

i would give you 10 stars if i could 100% HOT thanks 4 the nut

Ajcway12Ajcway12almost 3 years ago

Great but the brother and sister should of forced the mother the first time. I like it a bit rough

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story. Is there more stories coming?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved this storyline just wish it didn't end I'd love to know what happened in new location after Patty's baby was born

mrdata9770mrdata9770almost 3 years ago

Very Nice, well done. I wish I could give this story more than 5 stars. I'm sorry I was late to the game since this is 2/26/2021 and this story was posted on Chrismas of 2006. I'm looking forward to reviewing this author's submissions.

KawablurKawabluralmost 3 years ago

I enjoyed the story, but it was much too rushed. Keeping it to 1 chapter should have been at least 10 pages. And it would have been better as a series. I'm also not a fan of children from incestuous relationships. I consider it premeditated child abuse since the likelihood of deformities and retardation is high.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Did he also get to screw the children that he fathered?

totostorytotostoryalmost 3 years ago

I`m not a writer or critic, hence it`s only my opinion ,The built up and the tension were great, but the seductions was weak ,and the sex scene was short and quick. the writer is gifted, I think more seduction, dirty talk (specially during sex),and detailed sex scene would be better. thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story was used in android porn game Taboo stories : summer vacation

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It read as good the second time as it did the first. My personal opinion is it's finish and that you should move on to your next story. Others may want you to add chapters, and it would be easy enough to do, but I think it would take something good away from this story. Keep writing.

XYZ

taco1085taco1085over 2 years ago

I really wish you had extended this a few chapters. what a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My shaft was hard

raviddn002raviddn002over 2 years ago

I like the conversation type of story.well planned erotic stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story had me xumming and getting hard again as i read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Had everything what an stunning incest story should contain. Loved it so much. Loved the part where the mother accepts and blesses the sexual union of her children.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story I also became pregnant from my 18 year old son and now my daughter is pregnant

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

What a great story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

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