All Comments on 'Oily Evenings Ch. 05'

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blackknight314blackknight314almost 4 years ago

Finally! What other naughty things do you have in mind for our amorous couple.

Maybe mommy can wake up her husband to improve their sex life as well. MMF maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
artistic

Please go all theway

adifferentindianfamilyadifferentindianfamilyalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank You.

Thank you for all the love you've given this story. Chapter 6 will be up soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
great writing, sexy story

I think you are a very good writer. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but a second reading would fix them. I found the first part of your story very arousing, where the son was lusting after his mother and she was gradually encouraging him. Unlike other mother-son stories on this site, the slow pace and the plausible setting (scalp massage etc) made the story very erotic. Gradually as the couple became openly sexual and fuck, the excitement wore off in later chapters, and the story became like other usual stories. I was glad that he licked his mother's pussy in the last chapter. Licking her asshole would have been even nicer. I hope you write more stories in this vein, but keep the arousal high by describing the dance of lust more, and the actual fucking less, if at all.

TamillTamillover 3 years ago

Unless you have experienced it, you can't pen such a realistic story'. The narration was excellent. I expect more such story series on mom and son. Kudos

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