by Joeehartley
Interesting plot line and full of all kinds of interesting images. Nicely done! Thank you....perhaps a springboard for some other chapters?
Excellent story ! I hope you will continue to write about Jim & Claire's renewed relationship.
Once again Joe you nailed it ,timing ,length ,slow burn . I read these in the a.m. if no surf(too big and messy at present) so your story , a little bit of optimism to start the day stimulates a few neurons in a good direction.. Thankyou.
Excellent story I loved the build up and would enjoy more detail of their erotic experiences and activities thanks Rob
*****Hot read as usual. Very enjoyable read. Is there anyway you could give me the address to that erotic show they went to? 😉 Thanks for sharing.
Ribbleman, I simply delete comments like yours that offer nothing constructive.
I am just getting back to Literotica after a long absence. can't wait to read the rest of your stories. So hardening!
I'm 75 years old and got very aroused reading your story. I like the mature erotic theme.