All Comments on 'Old Testament'

OK WHILE IT LASTED.

I DECIDED TO UPDATE MY SCORE.....CINCO ESTRELLAS!

only complaint too short but amazing for 750

He’s probably not done

Needs more!

I wouldn't mind more of this story

🙊🙈🙉💨🤔😁

Over 100 comments, and not even one pointed out that the last thing that MC said included the word “today”. “I may not be able to kill y’all TODAY”. He doesn’t say anything about obeying man’s law and never killing them. He’s making it clear that he’s not going to kill them in front of witnesses. Everyone involved, including those who knew and didn’t tell, should be VERY afraid!!!

ZK

Short, sweet and VERY satisfying! Thanks for a great little read!

Good point, ZK, thanks. I missed that but you’re right, those folks might do well to relocate to find a new job somewhere else. Soon! Great story, Texican, thanks for bringing it. Absolutely a Five Star effort.

Dee

If it was fleshed out more, it'd be much better

*****Short and to the point! Thanks for the read.

Wow. That was intense and very nice for a short story. I would love the long version of this story and how he got to each one in the future.