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droidrzrdroidrzrabout 10 years ago
cliffhanger

We we have to wait a month now? Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love it!

I can't wait to see his continuing evolution. Great writing!

EdwarusEdwarusabout 10 years ago
Roar

Stopping it right there

LilwaynenOrLilwaynenOrabout 10 years ago
very nice

Speaking of threads "I'am dangling here". Truely checking the list daily to see for a new edition. Ty for share a peace of your writing skill!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
melody or harmony

I think she was named harmony on page 2 and then melody on p3. Might want to edit. Still a great story and writing though! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice story

But why not use a proofreader? There are numerous mistakes that should havee been corrected.

But it is entertaining.

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