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Eventually Olivia's crying let up and her breathing returned to normal. But she was still shaken by the whole experience.
Dr. Miloza held the exam room door open for Olivia in a gentlemanly fashion. As she reentered the room he said, "Now let's go get you shaved."
- COMMENTS
Morgan_Ellisover 3 years agoAuthorThanks for your comment. But I don't think you've been reading the chapters in chronological order.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis girl just can’t catch a break no matter what she does first she gets impregnated by the judge and then taken to the hospital for an examination to see if she is pregnant and that’s where all her troubles start. Murphy’s law must really be out to get her.
Anonymousover 5 years agoHello from Greece! well written story dear. Fantasy and sex role playing is great!
Morgan_Ellisover 6 years agoAuthor@ Bo47
Thanks for your comment! Chapter 6 has been submitted. Don't worry, Olivia will be facing more humiliation soon enough!
@ "1 or 2 stars"
Thank you for being more specific in your second comment. I appreciate hearing your feedback. I think you made fair points. And while I didn't necessarily agree with everything you wrote, thank you for expressing your views.
1) Thank you.
2) I'm sorry to hear that you don't like the direction of the story. But as I've said before in a previous comment, it's simply not possible to please to everyone. Different people are into different things.
3) Thank you for bringing this to my attention. I suppose I am too vague when writing the chapter descriptions. However, I would like to point out that in chapter 4, she was told that she would be getting two enemas. But by the end of chapter 4 she had only received one enema. So ... I'm not quite sure what you were expecting to happen in chapter 5. Did you think she was going to go on a date? And, by the end of chapter 5, she did meet an important man. So I'm not really convinced that the description was all that misleading. But I think you made a fair point and I'll try to write more detailed descriptions in the future so readers know what they're getting into. (Except for chapter 6. Because chapter 6 has already been submitted and the description for it is not very specific. So ... sorry ... I guess.)
4) This is a difference of opinion. But I thank you for sharing yours. I felt "the 'aisle' development" was an interesting way to further humiliate the character and show the doctor's dominance over her. But I get that not everyone will be into it. Different strokes for different folks.
5) That's cool; I don't take it personally. Thanks for not giving me a 1.
6) I realize the ratings for the last two chapters aren't quite as high as the ratings for the first three. I suppose I could try to write a more conventional story in an attempt to appeal to more readers and hopefully boost my star rating. But I feel that would be disingenuous. I write for fun; it's not my job. I'd much rather write the story that is in my head, even if it gets me a 4.12 instead of a 4.50. While getting a high score is very nice, getting the highest possible star rating isn't my number one priority. That's not to say that I don't want to hear feedback or constructive criticism, because I most definitely do. And that's also not to say that I'm not open to new ideas or that I'm unwilling to change things, because I am. But at the end of the day, there's a certain type of story I want to write and it's not going to be everyone's cup of tea. C'est la vie! (Maybe I will write something more "normal" in the future, but not in this series.) Anyway, sorry for the overly long reply. But I thank you for your comments and criticisms.
